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Reviews for From Bad to Worse

By : RyleeJane
  • From Howlsword on May 19, 2015
    very very good, especially the last chapter with bellatrix toying with harry......any chance of some more please..
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  • From ANON - stephie on August 04, 2014
    love the tortured and sexy Harry, keep writing, I wanna hear more
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  • From dragon37 on January 08, 2010
    I always liked reading about a 'bad attitude' Harry. As with the books, whenever I read anything Harry Potter, I always picture Dan Radcliffe, and he looks like he could give some attitude, especially in the bed room. Please continue.
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  • From benthan1 on December 05, 2009
    So glad to see you back posting. First read your fic at RS.org. Here you have more freedom to edit your story as many times as you need to. Luv your story!!! Not trying to rush you or anything but I hope you update soon.
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  • From missy2 on November 22, 2009
    YAY! I'm so happy you are continuing this story! Its been one of my favorites for a long time. Please update soon!
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  • From Elphaba on November 17, 2009
    I am so glad you are continuing this. It is an awesome story. One request, less star breaks across they make my screen roll funny.
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  • From SalonKitty on November 17, 2009
    Holy crap, you just took this story to a level I can truly appreciate. Harry/Bella and the prison sex is one of my favorite set-ups, so YAY! for that scene!! For some reason, though, you just don't get too many writers for it, although I think it practically writes itself out of canon. You know Bella probably diddled herself to sleep at night dreaming about getting her mitts on Harry and doing unspeakable things to him.

    So, yes, I can see his sex addiction so much more clearly now. If anything, it provided some relief from all that pain that was being inflicted on him, and psychologically, it still works as a de-stressing mechanism. Brilliant. And he's dragged poor, confused Hermione into it. Now I'm wondering what will have to happen for him to come clean with her. Oh, this tangled web is so enticing. Can hardly wait to see where you go with this story! Oh, and if Harry has a few more flashbacks with Bella and Narcissa, that would be swell.

    Great stuff!
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  • From SalonKitty on November 17, 2009
    Hmm, Rylee, I recall reading the first few chapters of this story once upon a time on another site, and I was really intrigued by the idea but lost your story along the way. This version seems like the racier edition. Not sure when you started this, but I love the dual POV's and you are portraying my absolute favorite Harry---namely, tortured and sexy as fuck. I love how incredibly complicated you've made their affair; Hermione being so torn up about the guilt but being a total slag for him whenever he wants her, and Harry in his best Harry-state trying not to let anyone see his vulnerability. I'm so curious about what happened to him after he was taken. I'm hoping it's deliciously awful.

    I feel so bad for Ron in this, and it saddens me how his relationship with Harry seems to have dwindled, as Harry obviously settled on the other third of the trio to be his confidante and comforter. I guess because he doesn't want (or can't, in this story) to shag Ron senseless, that friendship seems to have stumbled. Of course, I'm sure Harry is feeling his own sense of guilt buried underneath all those layers. He's a complex conundrum, so seemingly caddish and blunt on the outside, but roiling with all kinds of horrors within. Please tell me you're continuing this and that you haven't given up on it.
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  • From pfeil on November 17, 2009
    Wow; It *has* been a while.
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  • From serenagold on February 28, 2009
    This situation can only end horribly.


    I'm really enjoying this story. Keep up the great work!
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  • From DeLongated on October 16, 2007
    oh you are brilliant... i just found this site a few days ago and have been reading every h/hr story on... (i'm up to page 7 of 14 lol)... and i have to say this is my favorite by far... you definitely have the writing style i was looking for... i can not wait to read the rest of the story and check out if you have any others... keep up the fantastic work!!! -aj-
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  • From Gaara on September 24, 2007
    please update its been almost a year since ur last update i hope u didnt abandon this story cuz its great
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  • From ElizabethMac on April 01, 2007
    update please!! i just found this story and i love it!! I HAVE to know what happens .. i have to know if they get caught or if Hermione leaves Ron for Harry.

    Please, Please, PLEASE update.

    Mac.
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  • From ANON - melissa on January 04, 2007
    amazing! this story has me itching to find out what happens next. please update soon!
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  • From ANON - libra595 on December 26, 2006
    Great story, first 4 chapters are brilliant. I really wanna know wot happened to harry in school, and about he 'dependancy' on hermione, sounds great. U should really keep writing it, its brilliant, hope u update soon, call it a late xmas gift to your readers.
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