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Reviews for A Man Best Forgotten

By : emybug3712
  • From sbrande on January 21, 2009
    Intriguing start, although I do wish you would leave a space in-between paragraphs as it makes it easier to read.

    Cheers, Sonia :)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 11, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2006
    absolutely amazing story, i love it!
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  • From ANON - rev on July 03, 2006
    Gads but you're a horrible tease! So when is the next installment (s)? I'm curious to see how this plays out in the Bermuda Triangle of Snape, Potter & Granger.

    It IS a good story, you just need to write faster. LOLOL
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  • From ANON - septentrion on July 02, 2006
    ch5 : I expected this kind of action but not so soon. You've written it well enough but it didn't sound natural. One moment they don't know how to deal with each other, the next they're snogging like mad.
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  • From ANON - a_reader on June 30, 2006
    I have concrit about your story formatting. I'm having a hard time reading your story because of two things: You need to break your text up into shorter paragraphs. Long chunky blocks of text are very difficult to read online. Also, it would be helpful if you inserted breaks between your paragraphs, to make them easier on the eye. I've never posted stories on AFF, but imagine you want to put paragraph tags at the beginning and end of your paragraphs. To find out how to do this, go here: http://www.w3schools.com/tags/tag_p.asp

    Good luck!
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  • From ANON - septentrion on June 30, 2006
    ch 4 : this story is interesting so far, I'm looking forwart to read more.
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  • From ANON - Nemesis on June 30, 2006
    More, already! I like what you've written so far.
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