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Reviews for It Started With A Kiss

By : LVanna
  • From LVanna on August 08, 2010
    @vonHardenberg-It is because of supposed 'reviews' like the one you left that I have NOT written more in the last two years. Please learn how to write a proper review. (Hint:Say something nice first before tossing your form of con-crit in.)
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  • From vonHardenberg on August 08, 2010
    Please take note: Unlike then, than is not related to time. Than is used in comparative statements. "We learned more on the playground than we did in the classroom." and "He is taller than I am." Then is used either as a time marker or with a sequence of events. "I took all of the exams in the morning, and then I spent the rest of the day catching up on sleep." It drives me crazy and is quite common in fan fiction.




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  • From SolasDivided on January 21, 2010
    This is by far ten hundred times better than the original!! It's not easy taking something and making it polish and glow and you've done an amazing job!! I just wish you'd put me out of my misery and update! You are an amazing writer and don't let no stupid, hollow headed pea brain tell you otherwise. If they're too hotheaded and moronic to accuse you of something without evidence than they are just not worth it!! Some people have no class!!

    Keep writing, sweetie! You're #1 to me :)

    Your #1 cheerleader and fan!
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  • From LVanna on July 14, 2009
    To Alanrickmanfan21

    I don't recall it being a MUGGLE wedding. Hence the MUGGLE tradition of the newlyweds and the first dance was NOT used.


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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 14, 2009
    and jesus man! why didnt she get to dance with her new husband for more than 2 minutes seconds without someone asking to dance with her?
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 14, 2009
    *or done by anyone else BUT Hermione and Severus Snape! right?*
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  • From ALANRICKMANFAN21 on July 14, 2009
    surely the FIRST dance should be done by Hermione and Severus Snape the newly wedded married couple and NOT by Professor Dumbledore and Professor McGonagall, thats usually the case is it not?
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  • From shidaenogard on February 27, 2009
    Just when I was getting into the story there is no more. Please update soon, O would love to know more.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 07, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 18, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Ducky on March 11, 2008
    this story is fantasic, i just love the intricacies od it! plese write more! i'm hooked!
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  • From jacquie on February 07, 2008
    This is a really good story. i am in love with the whole HG/SS.
    hopefully u will update soon.
    keep up the good work.

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  • From MusicLovesSoul on January 05, 2008
    MORE!!! I NEED MORE!!! sry...it's a habit i have, when i practically fall in love with a story...
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 26, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 17, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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