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Reviews for It Started With A Kiss

By : LVanna
  • From ANON - LVanna on August 04, 2006
    Donavon - I knew I forgot to do something (smacking head on desk). Email me and I'll give the listing of it to you.

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  • From ANON - Donavon. on August 04, 2006
    Thank you for the new chapter. Can I ask where you got the information for
    the leaf's and herbs, making a wedding gift for Severus? I found it a lovely
    inclusion. Looking forward to reading more. Best wishes.
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  • From ANON - Nemesis on August 04, 2006
    I cannot recall if I have reviewed this fic yet, but will do so now: I am enjoying this fic, and do seem to remember reading one similar (perhaps the first draft?) a while ago. I have been keeping up with your story and am a very impatient person who wishes you do dedicate all your time to finishing this story. After all, you really don't need money for goods nor sleep - right?
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  • From ANON - Skullduggery on August 02, 2006
    I hope you will update soon! This story is soooo good!! Keep it up!
    Cheerio,
    Skullduggery
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Amethystique on July 29, 2006
    You are evil and must be tied to your computer and 'Imperio'd' into writing more amd more of this thoroughly enjoyable piece of literary yummyness!
    Fantastic Snape interaction with Hermione's parents.
    I humbly offer a large bar of Honeydukes Best Chocolate to your muse as inspiration for the completion of this wonderful story!
    Blessings : )x
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  • From ANON - mariteri on July 29, 2006
    I like it. The story itself is excellent. But one thing. This is silly and a pet peeve of mine.
    Grammer lesson-
    YOUR-is the possesive (ie your car, your hair, your computer, etc.)
    YOU'RE-is the contraction of YOU ARE (ie you're running late, you're a good writter, etc.)
    This mistake is all too common in fanfiction. Please could you work on this?

    Now as for the story itself, it is great. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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  • From ANON - Donavon on July 29, 2006
    Wonderful strong chapter. Loved Severus in this chapter. At first cooly assessing his future,
    before Hermione saw him. And then to actually show his emotive thoughts at Hermione's parents.
    Will be watching for more. Best wishes.
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  • From ANON - lady-isowen on July 29, 2006
    LOVED it!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on July 29, 2006
    Yay another great chapter. I can't believe how Hermoines parents are being such sillys! D
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on July 28, 2006
    A beautiful chapter. I think my favorite part was when Snape stepped between Hermoine and her father. I got chills hehe. More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Lydia on July 28, 2006
    i really like the way this is going. it will be interesting to see how everything plays out. can't wait til the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - firewall on July 28, 2006
    The other chpaters also lived up to the first two. I can imagine her parents reacting that way at first but I would think they would soon re-evaluate the situation. Just a comment, watch your pronouns. I caught a couple of "shes" when they should have been "hes." I
    will look forward to the next chapter next week.
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  • From ANON - firewall on July 28, 2006
    Ch 1 & 2 - I just read that you were hesitant to post this as you haven't written anything for years. It would have been a waste. Your story is well written and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing with us.
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  • From ANON - Miepje on July 28, 2006
    Great story. I really enjoyed reading this story so far and hope for more soon!
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