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Reviews for It Started With A Kiss

By : LVanna
  • From ANON - bobbie on July 08, 2006
    oh i like this very much,,,,,you have got to post more soon,,,lots more...PLEASE......can we say"M O R E !!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
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  • From ANON - Experience My Dreams on July 07, 2006
    I like it!! I seems different than the other things I have read!! Keep going!!
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  • From ANON - librarygirl on July 07, 2006
    I'm so glad you took on this story. I always liked the idea of it on ff.net and was disappointed that it was incomplete. You've got a great start, I hope you keep updating!


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  • From ANON - nedgo101 on July 04, 2006
    Love it, don't stop now!
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  • From ANON - Rose Evans on July 04, 2006
    I think it's a wonderful story!!!! Please keep me updated.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on July 04, 2006
    LOL! Lovely start. This definately has promise. I look forward to reading the rest of this.
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  • From ANON - Donavon on July 04, 2006
    Oh I like it, I really like it. Well done, I look forward to the aftermath. Because the Severus I know and love,
    will have lots to say. Once again brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Lady Voldemort on July 04, 2006
    Hey i liked it your doing an awsome job, i look forward for another chapter please!!!
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  • From ANON - cearrae on July 04, 2006
    Thank you for adding the Author's note at the beginning. It clarifies everything. As i had said in my e-mail to you, if I had thought this was out and out plagarism, I would have contacted the moderators directly. Many stories are taken over and finished by authors other than the original writer. That's fine, as long as it is perfectly clear. If you are so unfortunate to have a piece of your original writing taken and used without permission, you will understand. Writers of fan fiction are only as good as our next review and hit. We need to protect our intellectual property and that means looking out for other authors as well. One day, someone may do it for you.
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  • From ANON - Bree on July 04, 2006
    SO far so good!! =) Can't wait for the rest!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Fujin on July 04, 2006
    OO! This looks like it will be great! I love it so far!
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  • From ANON - Pam on July 04, 2006
    Hey, great start to the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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  • From slygriff21 on July 04, 2006
    This sounds like a very interesting story indeed. I can't wait to read more. Please update again and soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Killer Kadoogan on July 04, 2006
    Hmm... you have me very intrigued. I'll be keping my eye out for this one! I just love stories with these two while Hermione is still his student! It's just so naughty!!! Happy writing and hope to see an update soon!
    Killer K :)
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  • From ANON - anonymous on July 04, 2006
    I liked the previous version better -- not amazingly keen on this idea that relationships are pre-determined. In the donotsrock version, Hermione is ignorant of wizarding customs and kisses Snape on the cheek, which has special significance on specific days. It made sense that the things which are the hardest to determine as an outsider are the things "everyone knows" and Hermione would very likely be tripped up by something bizarre because everyone knows she has done all the research and doesn't need to be helped through the social issues.

    I like stories where people have to live with the consequences of their own actions (even though I felt sorry for Snape there.)

    This is one of those "The Gods say..." stories where the principle characters have no consent. Non-con relationships are squicky.

    I also agree with the other reviewer that you should be a lot more explicit that you have permission to redo/finish the story. There is plenty of room at the top for an author's note saying "Rewritten with permission from donotsrock. See the original version on ff.net at ____" It should certainly be part of the story, not just in the summary blurb.
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