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Reviews for It Started With A Kiss

By : LVanna
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 17, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2007
    wow, this story is addicting!

    i have loved it so far! it has just the amount of drama and humor in it.

    cant wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Katey on January 06, 2007
    omg this is so fantastic!!!!! And anyone who flamed you deserves to be hexed!!! I love the emotions you put in between hermione and Severus! For lack of better terms, it seemed, well, magical between them!! I actually started reading your other story you just started, sorry i cant remember the title, and i liked it so much i thought i would see what else you wrote and i came across this! I absolutly love it when an author creates their own A/U and has an in depth story line like yours does. Anyways, i'm very tired, and as it is very late, i must be going, but keep up the good work and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - sinbad on January 02, 2007
    I found this story by accident and read all 20 chapters without realising it. This is a good story & I look forward to updates.
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  • From ANON - Cecilia on December 25, 2006
    For Christmas you could have gave us an update, but I will settle for a good ole smut fic featuring ME and Remus. We miss your good writing skills and I sorely miss this story. Please come back and update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - lily of the valley on December 14, 2006
    love it! you have a sense of humor that is great but not overwhelming. it is very well written! kodos
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on December 12, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - For Curly Fron LVanna on December 10, 2006
    Thank you for your review. If you had taken time to read my A/N's you would have seen that I DID NOT REWRITE the Prologue or the first three or four chapters, except to change some pertinent parts of it to change the plot. All other chapters after those are ALL MINE, hence all errors, from there on, are mine.
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  • From ANON - curly on December 10, 2006
    Hi. So far I really like this story. I hope you explain more about the ancients. Please go through and eidt for apostrophes when showing onwnership/possession. In ch. 3, they are missing in quite a few places such as Hermione's rooms and something of Dumbledore's. Also, you split up many sentences or combine sentences improperly. Review the use of the wonderfully underutilized semicolon as a means of joining an adjunct thought to a main sentence. I also found it a bit odd that in Ch2 Hermione noted that Snape was not in the Great Hall for lunch, but in Ch3, Snape was there watching them; I guess he came in and she didn't notice. In Ch. 3, it was a bit odd in one paragraph you have Snape enjoying his walk to Dumbledore's office because the students were in class, but then went on about how much he liked walking the halls late at night. He must have taken a very very long route if it went from afternoon to late at night. Good for you; Ron acutally not being a total git. I am so sick of him so often being portrayed as hot-headed and dense which seems very out of character in comparison to his ability to think ahead and strategize in chess. In PS, he clearly can see ahead and understand that sometimes you have to accept the unpleasant choices in order to win in the end.
    I look forward to reading more.

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2006
    Wow! Thisjust gets better and better! :)
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  • From ANON - *DB* on December 07, 2006
    @21. great chapter can't wait for more. update soon
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  • From ANON - Heksy on December 07, 2006
    Yessss...finally I had the chance to read this new chapter.
    Oh my, it is going to be rather thrilling.
    Dinner with the Malfoys, that brother creeping around the place, Hermione's pregnancy...
    I wish it was New Year already...
    Keep it up...I'll be waiting for your next chapter and I think many others will be too.
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  • From ANON - Barbara on December 06, 2006
    Great update. Happy for Severus and Hermione.
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  • From ANON - Rosie on December 03, 2006
    Chapter One has no formating.
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  • From ANON - kimjo2 on November 30, 2006
    i am loving this story so far!! the lemons are delightfully tart and lemony and i absolutely adored the wedding. by the by you write the romantic parts beautifully, too. thank you so much and i look forward to further developements.

    p.s. it WOULD be a malfoy!
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