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Reviews for It Started With A Kiss

By : LVanna
  • From ANON - Amethystique on November 28, 2006
    Yippee! What a fantastic day. My computer is back up and running after an age and now I have spent 3 WONDERFUL hours catching up on this marvellous fic. I'm glad the chocolate worked for your muse so I humbly offer gifts of peppermint wands and gingerbread witches for your muses delectation.
    Blessings and thanks for all your hard work
    Amethystique x
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  • From ANON - *DB* on November 26, 2006
    @20. OMG i loved it!! You have to update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ava Allen on November 14, 2006
    Poor Harry. Why he can`t accept this situation? I have hope, that his friendship for Hermione is strong, and every thing will be ok.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 13, 2006
    Aw. I'm sad that Harry is behaving so poorly, but I'm so excited that the women were happy. Very great fic. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 13, 2006
    Great update!! Glad to your DH is doing well.
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  • From liquidvamp on November 11, 2006
    I stumbled across this story this morning and totaly fell in love with it. I'm sorry to hear about your husband. Here is wishing him a speedy recovery.
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  • From ANON - carolrain on November 09, 2006
    I both like and dislike this story. My compliments are major, my complaints are minor. The characterizations, pacing and plot are all admirable. The wedding scene was truly lovely. OOC Snape is gentle and likeable...the rest of the characters are quite canonical, and I appreciate the touches of humour. But the grammar and punctuation are atrocious. I blame the betas for not catching such obvious errors as 'then' instead of 'than', possessive 'your' used when the contraction 'you're' was intended, and so many runon sentences that I had to reread paragraphs two or three times just to catch the meaning. It interfered so much with my reading experience that I felt I had to tell you. Many great writers have their problems with technical matters, and you are talented enough that a good editor could make the difference between success and ridicule for you. Your betas have let you down. But keep on writing. "Your better then you're betas"!
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  • From ANON - Spoox on November 09, 2006
    I really, really like your story - it is very well written and I just love the storyline. Can't wait for the next chapter... and good luck with your husband's surgery, I'm sure he'll be fine. Spoox
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 08, 2006
    Of course we understand dear. Take good care of your DH. We will wait patiently for your next update.
    sheila
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  • From ANON - prettydelial on November 08, 2006
    I love this story, but I'm willing to wait indefinitely for the next installment, as real life definitely takes precedent. I hope your husband's surgery goes well.
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  • From ANON - annika on November 08, 2006
    Good luck to you and your husband. I enjoy your writing, and hope you return to it.
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  • From ANON - takemeaway on November 08, 2006
    OMG I hope everything is ok! Keep me posted, girl, and hang in there!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 08, 2006
    Sooo... I only got to about chapter 8 or 9 when I saw you mentioned that you had flamers and that baffles me. The writing and plot is really fantastic. I don't understand why people make such a big idea about the wedding (by the way, beautifully done. It must have taken you forever to write that, so thank you for the hard work!). Yes, I suppose there are certain charcteristics of religion incorporated, but this is fan fiction for a very obvious reason. It is not REAL and most fics come from the writer's fantasies and wants. But anyways... The way the romance started is so cute. ^_^ I just loved it. I realize that I haven't finished the fic yet, but I'll go ahead and say it. I think we should see the "mean" side of Severus now and again. This reminds us that Hermione is still married to THE Severus Snape, and he won't seem to be falling from his character as time goes on.

    The Malfoy family's acceptance of her piques my interest. It'd be cool to see some relationship grow from it, like a protectiveness or something of the sort. Buuuut, I should probably read on to see if you've already done so! LoL So great job!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 08, 2006
    My thoughts and prayers are with you and your husband. I hope things go well.Take care.
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  • From ANON - pittwitch on November 08, 2006
    Hope all goes well!
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