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Reviews for It Started With A Kiss

By : LVanna
  • From ANON - Cecilia on November 02, 2006
    Woohoo an update!! I can't wait to see how the rest of Hermione's pregnancy goes. I can just imagine the look on Harry's and Ron's faces..lol...Update soon please and wonderful chapter I might add!!
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  • From Emmylovedraco on November 02, 2006
    Thanks for the update this story is getting good I hope to see more update's soon i can't wait, your friend Aka EsmeraldaSnape.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2006
    Great fic!!! :) I'm loving it. Keep up the wonderful work!
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  • From ANON - megan on November 01, 2006
    Please update soon. I really love this story. Please Please update soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 01, 2006
    Awwwww!!!!! I love it. Lol that sure put Severus at a loss for words. And ohhh Harry is stepping on Hermione's toes hope he learns to stop. It would be a shame to see them part as riends however I am glad she stuck up for her husband. I love those two together. I love delicious Severus anyways lol. more more more please. Awesome chappie. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - aenfnsdfn on November 01, 2006
    uh okay whats with all the fuckin repetition of "wife" over and over again? that sounds lame. but other than that, this story rox, dude. good job!
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  • From ANON - Jeanne on November 01, 2006
    A beautiful Chiristmas eve!
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  • From ANON - Barbara on November 01, 2006
    Love Severus being confused and at a lose for words. This was so sweet.
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  • From ANON - anya on October 30, 2006
    It may have been 10 chapters ago, (LOL) but, I would like to applaud your wedding scene. No, JKR doesn't include much religion - merely passing mentions of Christmas and Easter. However, we fan fiction writers aren't JKR. If we were we wouldn't add to the wonderful universe she created. We'd leave it at canon, and there would be no SS/HG. There wouldn't even be any need to post at Adult FF. All fan fiction is alternate universe - only JKR's writing isn't. A creative fan fiction writer employs artistic license ad infinitem ... so - *applause* to your creative wedding scene. You do what you want to do, and your loyal readership will appreciate it. Those who don't... can read something else. It's for you to write. It's for your reviewer to offer encouragement and constructive critisism. As a reader I found the binding scene to be complete and utterly beautiful. You included a basic introduction from Albus which would be necessary for those readers not familiar with these kind of binding rituals. Everything was very well written. The only constructive critisism I can offer for this scene is that you might have included a bit more of Severus and Hermione's points of view, and perhaps a few more descriptors. However, it is not necessary. As I said the scene did not feel lacking. It was very well done and quite touching. It seemed very natural, not contrived or taken from any Pagan / Wiccan resource verbatem. It was lovely. You can't please everyone. You did please me; and, I am sure you pleased countless other readers. However, you need only please yourself. Thank you for sharing your wonderful writing.

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  • From ANON - Jade on October 29, 2006
    Good Chapter. Please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Barbara on October 29, 2006
    Great update, looking forward to seeing what Julius Malfoy is up to .
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  • From ANON - Kathryn on October 29, 2006
    Excellent story!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 27, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Allie on October 26, 2006
    More... please, more!!!
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  • From ANON - Cecilia on October 23, 2006
    By the way, don't let these flamers get to you. You are doing a great job. We all read fan fiction
    (or at least I do) to break away from the , sometimes, harsh realities of real life. If for five minutes I can read your story and forget that I am late paying a bill or I may be way too low on money, then you deserve an Oscar my lady. I can be having a horrible day at work but if for a few minutes I know I can read some great fan fiction to get my mind off of it, then it makes it all better. Yes, people I do have a life outside my computer screen. As the rest of us do. I work in the medical field. I see harsh realities every single day. I love reading a story that I can imagine that I am Hermione or that I could be having sex with Remus. It does make me happy. And lets face it people, its not all peaches and cream in the real world. Fan fiction is our escape from it. When a reviewer attacks a writer no matter how good or bad that story may be, it takes away our escape. No person is forcing another reader to read or review his or her stories. Adult Fan Fiction gives us a window into a world that 10 years ago did not exist. Lets all be happy that someone unlocked that window and now all of us can climb through it.

    And to you my wonderful writer of It Started With a Kiss, I hope to see you continue with this and many more stories yet to come!!! Good Luck Too You!!!
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