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Reviews for State of the Union

By : lbrado
  • From ANON - Allison on August 25, 2006
    LOVE IT!!! So continue please...sure I have read stories where Hermione and Draco get married...but this one is different!! I love sweet Draco but I also love bad Draco!!! ;) Can't wait till your next update!
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  • From ANON - slykitten on August 24, 2006
    This story is wonderful so far. I love how gentle youve made Draco with Hermione. And the lovemaking scenes are, in two words, very sexy. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to the rest!
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  • From ANON - Laura on August 24, 2006
    I think this story is good please update soon. I don't really like how Hermione is so submissive it really puts out the fire when Draco and Hermione finally get together. But its good all the same.
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  • From ANON - savysavestheday on August 24, 2006
    Oh, I definitely fancy this fic and although I usually do go for "more" evil Draco, this one just stole my heart... he's so cute and she's so... I dunno, but I like this weird state of hers and how she's slowly but rather surely cracking out of it. It's interesting to read. Me wants more!
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  • From ANON - Deirdre on August 24, 2006
    waiting for the next one already :)
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  • From ANON - georgina on August 24, 2006
    I love it. It really is a well done story, I sorta want Hermione to be her normal firey self again so I want to see what happens.

    Update!

    geo
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  • From ANON - tank on August 24, 2006
    awesome
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  • From ANON - jaqui on August 24, 2006
    I think I already reviewed this fic, but I want to say again that I love it...I hope Draco can get her out of her funk.

    I also wanted to say that I dont think you should write with us in mind, write for you and only you. I think authors do their best work when they write for themselves, and dont think about what their audience might say about it.
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  • From ANON - LadyRain on August 24, 2006
    Amazing story! I am loving every chapter, not matter how short or long really. Though at the beginning I wasn't fond of Hermoine's attitude I think I like the way Draco is determined to help her push through it. I just hope it takes much more than just those random physical moments.
    I'll be looking for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Ayesha on August 24, 2006
    i really liked it...but when is hermione going to become herself again??
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  • From ANON - ccrawley on August 24, 2006
    Greatly enjoying the story. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - moxie on August 24, 2006
    Yay!!!!! An update! And a fresh chapter too! I love this story, and it's progressing very nicely. Loved the smut, of course. Although, I am surprised that despite the fact that they've done the deed several times already, dear Draco has yet to "service" hermione. Well.

    I like how his real opinions on marriage, as opposed to what's outlined in the marriage contract, are slowly making their way known. Does he really want to get her knocked up so soon?? And I wonder when Hermione will begin catching on...

    Love it! Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - kris.t!n.e on August 24, 2006
    wooohooo!! Thanks for the chap!! i like the way it's going...i love how the chap ended, tehehhe made me chuckle. can't wait to find out what Draco will get up to, to get a rise out of Hermione. and what will finally break Hermione out of her misery. . it's exciting and can't wait... again great stuff!! post more soon!
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  • From ANON - baybevoyce on August 24, 2006
    Ack! I, just in kind, return the thanks for the time and consideration you took to explain it to me. Before, I rather thought you had little semblance of where this story was headed, and therefore kept some things implicit so I apologize for my misunderstanding. Your response was duly noted!
    As for this chapter, I've always imagined a mary-sue Hermione to be the kind you've described: as wonderful and serene as a cherub. Sitting in the clouds. Looking adorable. Okay maybe that's taking it too far, but you get it.
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  • From ANON - Salome on August 24, 2006
    Please do continue! At first I was a little skeptical, it didn't sound right that Draco would decide to marry her the day right after her parents died to make her feel better. Maybe I misread it and it was some time later, but it would seem more accurate that anyone who really cares would give her more time. No one can get over death in a day. But other than that, I've liked a lot of the plot developements. I really want to see what happens next, so please keep writing, if not for others, for yourself :)
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