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Reviews for State of the Union

By : lbrado
  • From ANON - Amy on August 07, 2006
    Please come back and update. I really enjoy this story, and would love to see it finished.
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  • From ANON - michelle on August 02, 2006
    alright, you have had more than enough time to write!!!! I need MORE!!!! Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2006
    I want more. Give me!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Lucky101 on July 24, 2006
    i like this story aalot actually and its well written so if you would be so kind as to throw us a chapter i owudl love it always!
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  • From ANON - michelle on July 23, 2006
    you soooooo need to update this story!!!
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  • From ANON - WriterLady1031 on July 21, 2006
    Wow, I always know that I'm in for a well-written story when I find one of yours on this site. I'm very appreciative of your writing and I would definitley like to read more of this story as well. Please continue and soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2006
    loved it so far! Keep writing more of it.
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  • From DA4life on July 11, 2006
    plz tell me you are gonna update.....that was a great chap i'm dying to know what will happen
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  • From DA4life on July 11, 2006
    what the hell is Draco playing at ...........taking advantage of her when she's in such a state.....great chaps though i would've reviewed the other chapters but i was too intent on reading the next chapter so plz forgive me!!
    sanaa (saz) xoxox
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  • From ANON - Malin on July 11, 2006
    A lovely beginning, and if you are so inclined, a very nice ending too. If you choose to continue I'd be more than happy to read. I think you avoided a lot of clich
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  • From ANON - Madeline on July 10, 2006
    wow i love this story !
    i cant wait to find out what
    happens next ! update soon please !!
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  • From ANON - Cara Morte on July 10, 2006
    This is a very unique story.
    I must say I really do like it.
    I hope Hermione comes back though. I miss her too :]
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  • From ANON - baybevoyce on July 07, 2006
    I was slightly put off by the way you tried to justify Hermione's concession to Draco because I thought perhaps you could have explained the reasons behind her actions more in depth, rather than just having her display a case of extreme apathy. And I was more than surprised that Harry and Ron didn't react more angrily to Draco's idea of a reactionary measure turned into a big deal. But I felt like your writing improved a lot since the first chapter or maybe it's just because I like longer chapters and I can confuse quantity with quality... However, I hope you don't take this to mean I don't like the story. Because I do! Things turned out nicely. I rather like the way you handled Draco and Hermione while in bed. Not the sex per se, although it was good smut, I mean each of their prohibitions towards one another, especially the mild way in which Draco treated Hermione.
    So I hope this review helped, and that I, along with the other readers, will be seeing chapter 7 real soon!
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  • From ANON - Ans on July 07, 2006
    Aww... how devestating, can't wait for the twist of fate to occur. And it doesn't matter that the chapter is short, its well written so it makes up, it caught my attention.
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  • From ANON - Lexy on July 07, 2006
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! You CANNOT just leave it there, you wicked wicked writer you. Please update this soon. I absolutly love this fic.
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