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Reviews for State of the Union

By : lbrado
  • From Crittenz on October 30, 2007
    I am reading the story and I like it so far. The chapters are short but I was warned of it from the beginning. However I like the jist behind it in fact. It's actually uncommon and not cliche for Hermione's parents to have died. The whole fact that she's too depressed to fight him off is a new twist too so don't worry about your storyline being overused. This is a new take on the marriage law fic that I haven't seen before. I am reviewing now after like the third chapter (or maybe the fourth) so I don't know exactly where it is going yet. However when I read the "Please Review" type comments at the bottom the page I took a break from reading and decided to write this review. =^_^= I'll review again when I have finished reading what you have posted so far.
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  • From ANON - zauza on October 14, 2007
    i like your story very much! Draco is everything he should be, a gentleman, educated, Slytherin,eheh, (I love Slytherin),even if I am a Gryffindor myself, or probably because i am one ,Ahahah, anyway, I just hope Mione is not going to became the-litlle-know-it-all that alwyays get's her way, because she doesn't know it all and needs to learn a little about life.I wish someone would write a story where she is not taking control of everything and everyone,but learning more and realize that books don't teach you everything and beeing the best student doesn't make you the best person!
    Sorry for this...I should be telling you that your story is great and i like the way you write very much! and i do. thank you
    and forgive my bad english. I'm portuguese and writing in english is a hard time
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  • From sirsevchick on October 13, 2007
    Love it! I just discovered this fic and now I cannot wait for the update.
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  • From KraeHi on October 13, 2007
    Oh I am looking forward to the next chappie. I love the confrontational relationship they share, it should be promising! update soon!
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  • From hppyflwr on October 04, 2007
    PLease don't forget about us. I love this fiction and I'll be waiting for you to update it. please update soon.

    You totally ROCK
    hppyflwr
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  • From sherrithewriter on September 26, 2007
    Great story. Please let me know when you update it. I have really enjoyed it.
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  • From ANON - TNgirl on July 10, 2007
    I'm really enjoying your story! The only thing that would be better is if you would change your format. Please!! As it is I can't increase the size of the font because then it runs off the page. A small thing I know but it makes it easeier for me to read! I can't wait to see the next update!
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  • From ANON - mandala on July 08, 2007
    it was good, and the idea of "zombie" hermione really don't fit her canon personality.continue please...
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  • From jamieblye on July 07, 2007
    Glad you updated- I love this story and this chapter in particular- wonderful! Come back soon :)
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  • From phoenixorder13 on July 07, 2007
    I hardly ever review on this site, becuase it's basically just smut. However, I really like this story and I thought you should know. If you could kindly email me when your updates are raady, I'd greatly appreciate it. This is the only story I plan on keeping up with on this site---I absoultely love the way you've written Draco! I'm just jealous that it wasn't me he married!!!
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  • From ANON - Lisi on July 07, 2007
    I love it! Please email me with the next, you left me craving for more!
    A big hug
    Lisi
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  • From catysmom1028 on July 07, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From Pumkin on July 07, 2007
    thank you for the updae. very well done. keep up the good work.you managed to do them working things out witout making it too much not like them.if that makes any sence to you. please update soon.
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  • From ANON - zara on June 13, 2007
    Please keep up...I just loove post Hogwarts Draco/Hermione....and you do them so well
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  • From PsychoKitty on June 08, 2007
    I just read the whole story in one sitting. Fabulous! I can't wait to see what you have planed for the ending. Please make it soon!
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