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Reviews for State of the Union

By : lbrado
  • From ANON - Panther Eyes on May 23, 2007
    i guess they will ok... for now.
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  • From Drkstdwn262 on May 23, 2007
    can't wait for more
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  • From ExperienceMyDreams on May 23, 2007
    Good Chapter!!!
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  • From on May 23, 2007
    I am so happy that there was not a cliffhanger in this chapter, because those seem to drive me crazy. I am also glad that you did not make it easy for them to come back together, since in real life working on problems is never as easy as saying, "I'm sorry." I love that he got a little bit of his spitfire back, but I think it is important to note that she is not the same person that they were at school and neither is he. We all change and mature as life changes around us. For people in their young adulthood, this is so true and I can only imagine how hard it would be to lose a parent when all of those other changes are also at play. You did a wonderful job with this story and I want to see them deal with a child coming into their home and the disruption that it causes for everyone. Maybe in a sequel? You have done such a great job with this story that I would happily read on. Keep up the great work on your last chapter of this story.
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  • From butterfly22503 on May 23, 2007
    wonderful! I hope you write more when this is done, because you are a good writer and I enjoy your style!
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  • From kazfeist on May 23, 2007
    Thanks so much for the update, hon! I'll email you later, ok? Karen
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  • From invisible8 on May 23, 2007
    Appraises to God!

    Finally found a draco/hermione fic that I always wanted to read. When I first read all those marriage law fanfics, the only top story to last a wonderful impression was 'A Dowry of a Single Galleon'. Now this has joined the list.
    All I gotta say is I love what you have written so far.

    And the emotions or lack of emotion you've given to Hermione is really believable. This is an adultfic with every chapter having some juicy smut.

    finally have my dramione addiction sedated for now.

    Do update soon.
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  • From kazfeist on May 23, 2007
    I don't know if I have already reviewed, but consider this an additional one....can't wait to see where she's been! :D
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  • From ANON - zara on May 23, 2007
    I just wanted to say_work well done_I really love your persistance in portraying hermione's numbness (I hope my writing doesn't bother you, English is not my first language). Hopefully, she'll get out of it soon, because I'm really curious to see how you'll turn her around. Update soon?
    zara
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  • From lovelytiger on May 22, 2007
    Love this story. Can't wait to see where it goes now that H. is back. Hope you can updated again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2007
    Great chapter, I really liked the last line "I do." The only thing that seemed a bit off to me was this line: He sighed and lifted to the phone to begin the arrangements. I would think that Draco Malfoy would use the floo network instead of a muggle invention. Wonderfully written, and the plot is getting rather interesting. I can't wait to read more!


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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2007
    I've only read the first chapter, and already I'm pleasantly surprised at your writing style. Very well written, and because of that I'm hooked already. I can't wait to see what you can do with this idea. Brillant so far, please keep going with this.
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  • From Magali on May 21, 2007
    great story! i love it and you're right the cliffhanger here is terrible... can you please send me an email when you update? iamladylena@yahoo.fr
    thanks
    magali
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  • From ANON - Joanna on May 21, 2007
    oh you witch! u left a cliffy again! Hahahaha....well i hope this time you will update sooner than before. this chapter was good. it gave insight of draco's thoughts on Hermione's absence and on children. it's good to know that he actually cares for her and that because of hermione, it made him changed his mind about kids. can't wait for the next one!

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  • From Given2Fly on May 21, 2007
    You are SUCH an evil little cliffie witch! You rotten thing you! LoL

    Seriousness though. Awesome chapter. I can't help but feel sorry for pobrecito Draco. Hermione has a looooooooooooooot of explaining to do!!!!

    Update soon, luv!
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