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Reviews for Breathless

By : mandaamen
  • From ANON - Avari20 on July 25, 2006
    This story was too funny. Normally I hate first person narratives (I can't stand not knowing what EVERYONE is thinking, and I'm sure there's some psychological explanation for that), but seeing it first hand from Draco's point of view added that little extra something to his character. I liked how you portray him as completely devoted to Hermione (Cute nicknames like Study-bug? I love it!)but he's still tough as nails. Looking forward to an update!

    -Avari
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 09, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - anonymous on July 08, 2006
    Ok so I totally love this story and the #1 reason is because it is in dracos view and he really has some comical thoughts.......looking forward to the next chappie.....
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  • From ANON - Eliana on July 06, 2006
    mm smutty !
    update soon !

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  • From ANON - Stag on July 06, 2006
    oooooh....I want an update!
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  • From ANON - joanna on July 06, 2006
    Love your story! It's humorous and witty!
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