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Reviews for A Newly-Formed Love

By : siriusblkfan4lif
  • From potatoedecapitain on August 17, 2007
    hahahahaaaaaaaa!!!!
    nymhadora! a virgin!!!??? not bloody likely!!!
    apart from that...not bad.
    gabsx
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  • From ANON - bookworm on November 11, 2006
    Seriously? Tonks is most definitely not a virgin. Did you notice her age at all or her personality for that matter?
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  • From ANON - abbie on August 30, 2006
    wow i want more!!! update fast please!!!! i want to hear more of these of tonks and lupin!!! i dreamed about it since i read that she liked him at the end of the order of the phoenix!! this is really really REALLY good the detail is nice
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  • From ANON - lina on August 29, 2006
    i really loved it. tonks was really well written and remus stayed in character.
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  • From siriusblkfan4lif on July 11, 2006
    thanks for your review!
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  • From amazingenthusiasto on July 09, 2006
    Hello! Just wanted to drop an honest review and let you know that you have a great start here.

    One thing I look for when reading fanfic is the quality of the characters. Your story maintains a pretty good interpretation of Lupin. However, when it comes to Tonks, I think you should go back and re-read some of her dialogue and actions. When I read them, I got the distinct impression that this was some other character and not Tonks at all (aside from the newly returned pink hair that is. *grin*) Where was the fire? Where was the cheekiness?

    I wish you the best of luck with this one, as Lupin and Tonks is one of my favorite pairings, though I'm told it's not popular to the HP-Purists. Pish on them. Let me know if you decide to re-work this, I'd love to come back and read it.

    ~Enthusiasto
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