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By : AliAnn
  • From enslavementthesis on March 16, 2008
    Story: Quite brilliant.
    Was very fond of Lucius' little escapade. *Sniffle*
    Quitting smoking: Drink fluids out of straws, avoid any situations You know will trigger cravings.
    distract Yourself during said cravings - read, write, watch television, fidget with beads or something
    Gum, Lozenges or Patches DO help. A lot.
    She quit over a year ago.
    Overall - KEEP YOUR HANDS OCCUPIED
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 16, 2008
    Good advice!!!! Sooo need chapter 6!!!
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on March 16, 2008
    Wow amazing story so far! I really enjoyed reading it. Update asap!

    As to quitting smoking, you can do it! Just think of how much cleaner everything will be without the constant influence of nicotine! It's not easy, but you're getting there, you obviously want to quite if you've gotten this far and that's half the battle. I know you can do it! Don't give up!

    Back to the story, I was just wondering how old Draco and Harry are in the first bit, and then again two years later (obviously two years onto the original age) just to get a bit more understanding on their motivations. When you say that everyone is dead for Harry, do you mean like Ron, Hermione, Dumbledore, Sirius, all the Weasleys, etc? I haven't seen them in the story so I presume you must have, but just to clarify.

    Anyway I look forward to reading more
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 07, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 5!!! Oh no!!! Lucius just walked in!!!
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  • From dracoharry4life on March 06, 2008
    Harry needs smacked.
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  • From ANON - Melora on September 29, 2006
    As far as I'm concerned Harry is worse than Greyback. At least Greyback has never pretended to be anything but a monster, but Harry is supposed to be the Golden Gryffindor. It would have cost Harry nothing to let Draco stay in safety in his house for two weeks while he drew up his slave contract (and blackmailing Draco into serving him as a sex toy was another low). Instead he deliberately abandoned him to a life of abuse, rape and torture - and his justification for this is that Draco was mean to him at school. Well, guess what, Harry? Calling people bad names and making "Potter stinks" badges does not mean you deserve to be sold into slavery to a psychopath by your own father!
    And two years later, after finding Draco in horrifying circumstances, Harry has the unmitigated gall to pretend that it's Draco's own fault for "choosing" to become Greyback's slave - did he truly think Draco would have appealed to him for help in the first place if he had had any other way of escape?!?
    Personally, I hope that Harry learns some well-needed lessons in humanity in the chapters to come.
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  • From ANON - jojo on September 27, 2006
    OH!!! this is so sad! I like Harry this way. I also like sweet and caring Harry, but I think this Harry is sweet deep down inside, but he doesn't want to be... Mmm... I'll just have to see, so please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2006
    great! continue please : )
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on September 26, 2006
    Damn I feel bad for Malfoy.

    And it looks like harry got brainfucked a few too many times. Yikes.

    Good writing though, please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Harley Quinn on July 28, 2006
    Omg the computer cut off the rest of my review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Now I have to sum it up. Short
    I fricken loved this story and all that you've done!Please write more!I'll be waiting!
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  • From ANON - Harley Quinn on July 28, 2006
    Omg I loved that!!Will there be more?!Please right more!I exspecially loved the way you made Harry. He was so dangerously cool!And Draco
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  • From ANON - Dezra on July 24, 2006
    I keep checking to see if you updated this story, will you let Draco find a way out of his predicament?
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  • From ANON - Argo on July 17, 2006
    Well, it was definitely shocking beginning. I was almost scared by Harry's coldness and indifference about Draco's fate. But I guess I can understand that souls grow coarse and become hardened during war and due losses of loved ones. I'm totally terrified for Draco. I hope you hadn't planned to give Draco to Greyback, I suspect it would be the rape scene there, and my poor weak nerves wouldn't bear this.
    But I have one question: you hadn't specified the pairing of your story. It it MasterDraco and Slave Harry, as "Yes, My Lord" or on contrary MasterHarry and SlaveDraco?
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  • From ANON - kitsu on July 17, 2006
    I'm enjoying this so far. I really like how you have Harry act out his anger towards Draco. In a lot of the stories I've read, he gets soft at the beginning which is fine and all but this seems mroe realistic to me. Draco was an arse to him during school and I don't think it is something one can forget so easily. Composition wise, it is very smooth and that's really awesome. Keep it up, i can't wait to see what happens.
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  • From ANON - Araniel on July 17, 2006
    Please...keep writing , i love it!!!!!
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