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By : AliAnn
  • From kekeEB3683 on October 18, 2008
    **tear** I fear this story has been abandoned. This makes me so sad because I enjoyed this story so much. Please, please come back to it. I still check for an update about once a week hoping that it will be coming back. I hope you are able to find the time to continue with it because I think it has a lot of potential to be a great story!
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  • From ghostly on September 05, 2008
    I was wondering if you are going to continue with this story. I love it so far and hope for more in the future
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  • From kekeEB3683 on June 01, 2008
    Hey! It's me again. Just checking in to see how the story is going. I find that I still check the website almost every day to see if there is an update. I hope, hope, hope that you don't abandon this story because I like it so much! I can't wait to hear what happens next! Usually when I am reading a story that hasn't been updated for a long period of time I just forget about it and move on, but I like this one so much that I can't quite let it go yet. I hope you were able to fix the problem with that computer virus and were able to get all your stories back in order. I am sure you are busy, and that's why you have not been able to update. I know how that goes. I started a fic for another fandom (Queer as Folk) a few years ago and anticipated it being a long one, but stopped after two chapters and never went back to it. It works as a two chapter short story, but I occasionally got emails asking if I was going to finish it, so after a couple of years I finally I went changed it from a "work in progress" to "complete". So, that was a long way for me to say how I understand that life can get in the way, lol! Still, I'm hoping that this story will continue and I will keep checking regularly for updates. Good luck!
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  • From kekeEB3683 on May 10, 2008
    Hey! I really love this story and I was just wondering when you were going to start updating it again. It has been about three weeks and I am dying to hear what happens next! I am so sorry that you had that computer virus, I know that must suck. I really hope you don't abandon this story because I think it has great potential. Most of the Master/Slave type stories have Draco as the master and Harry as the slave, and they make Draco this sadistic, cruel character. I love that you have flipped it around and put Harry in charge. Not only that, but I love that you have made him a good and moral person. He isn't particularly kind or nice, but he is good, and I love that dynamic. I can't wait to see how you build up their relationship to the point where Draco is willing to have sex with Harry. Keep up the great work and I am waiting on pins and needles for an update!
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on April 20, 2008
    this is a wonderful story! please update soon!!! woot! cant wait
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on April 19, 2008
    Hmmm, like you said, shorter, but it had some vital stuff in it. Draco's thoughts were extremely accurate in my opinion. I can't get over the fact that he said something like 'Nothing Potter could do would change that' it's just so typical a response, and the fact that it's the same kind of words and meaning one of my friends is using against me at the moment - 'you have no idea what I've been through' etc. It just worked perfectly that scene for me.

    As for your earthquake, I was like OMG COOL. I live in Australia and we barely get anything like earthquakes either, at least not where I am. I was like what is she on about, the bed was moving? Is someone shaking it? lol. I had this image of a mother type figure holding onto the end bed post and madly shaking the entire bed.

    Anyway, can't wait for more! The shopping trip sounds like it could be very interesting. I was going to say 'The shopping trip sounds like fun!' but thats more because I love shopping trips, but I don't see Draco enjoying the crowds overly much. The electrical store might interest him however, even I get astonished by some of the things big appliance stores have, you could lose me for hours in there if I was allowed to play with it all!! lol.

    OK so, looking forward to an update and good work with this!
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From jaimie on April 19, 2008
    an earthquake huh? ^_^ i've never felt one. hurricanes, on the other hand... lol. I hope your house is alright.
    viruses! urgh horrible little buggers aren't they? losing all that you've written is so depressing! I don't mind at all if the chapters take a little longer, I'm just glad that you're still continuing *glomps*

    I like that Harry wants Draco to be able to get over the 'Greyback thing' before he starts anything with Draco but he has a long way to go with that. I do hope that Draco gets over 'not knowing his place' soon. I think Harry teaching Draco to cook will be a very good time for bonding. Not that the shopping trip wouldn't be, but I think Draco's too nervous. I can't wait for his reactions to the muggle store!
    I'd like to learn more about Harry, and why he's 'Hard-assed Harry' aside from all his friends dieing. A more in-depth look at him, if you will. His plans to over-throw Voldemort.

    anyways, The shopping interests me and I'll be waiting for that chapter when it comes!
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 19, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 10! Hope Harry knows what he's doing!
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  • From cnor9602 on April 19, 2008
    I am really enjoying this story. However, I wonder how long it will be before Draco gives into physical contact with Harry. As is so often the case with victims of assult, it takes a very patient and loving hand to bring them back around to intimacy again.
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  • From shinythiefxblast on April 18, 2008
    Yeah I didn't heard about the earthquke until i got to work this morning. i can sleep through anything i swear. I like this chapter.
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  • From goldentrio on April 14, 2008
    I'm really sorry to hear your computer caught a virus. Hopefully everything will be back to normal for you soon.
    I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter. :)
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  • From shinythiefxblast on April 14, 2008
    Oh i'm so sorry about what happened to your computer. that sucks i would absolutly die if i lost my computer. I'll wait or every new chapter.
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  • From thrnbrooke on April 09, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 9! Draco could have it all if he just tried!
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on April 06, 2008
    Hmmm, the Draco/Muggle subject. I think it's actually quite logical. Draco sees moving pictures, realizes that appliance is muggle n they cant have moving pictures, decides people must be inside box. Really quite logical. And yeah his reaction was good.

    Ahh the Greyback issue! Once again the werewolf strikes Draco even when he's beyond the werewulf's control. Damn him.

    I liked this chapter, just too tired to go into detail with wat was good and bad. If you wish my opinion specifically on anything I'd be happy to chat, you have my email, just send me a msg

    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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  • From kekeEB3683 on April 05, 2008
    Great chapter! I think it is perfectly believable that Draco would be unfamiliar with how a TV works. He has had no contact with any muggle objects or artifacts of any kind. I think it is plausible that, at first glance, he would think there were actually little people in the TV. Upon closer inspection he might have figured out that they were not inside, but were a 2-dimentional image like, as Harry said, a magical portrait. Draco, however, didn't get the chance to inspect the TV more closely because he broke it. I really liked that Harry was softer in this chapter, that he held his anger in check upon seeing Draco's distress. It shows that he has more dimensions as a character, rather than just being one-sided and angry all the time. I like that Harry was so insistent that Draco read their contract. Hopefully it will alleviate Draco's role confusion and the tension he feels all the time. I also hope it gives him more confidence to be himself and to stop fearing Harry so much. I'm really getting hooked on this story and given my earlier trepidation, that's saying something. I just wish we could have an update more than once a week; the wait just kills me! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for chapter nine!
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