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Reviews for Mrs.Malfoy

By : WitchatHeart77
  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on July 14, 2006
    Ah I see dear lucy is being his very bad self. I really must punish him!

    Anyway. I just wanted to say VERY GOOD! You may be recieving flames but ignore them my dear wicked witch! You are a fantastic writer and its plain to see if this is a SS/HG then it won't remain LM/HG for long and things will get better.

    I do hope they do soon!


    So If your a flamer and reading this review, retract your comments quick sharp or you shall feel the heal of my boot in your backside!


    Vampire Has Spoken!!!!

    and wicked you may add my warnings to flamers in your next chapter if you wish. I could do with some fresh game to hunt.


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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on July 14, 2006
    Aveda Kadevra! Well that's what I wanted to say to Mr. Malfoy.


    Write more! You don't want the readers to always think of Hermione in this miserable state do you?? ;-; *emoes*
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  • From ANON - WickedlyWanton on July 13, 2006
    Well, I can understand some of the thoughts about Hermione being OOC. I think that the opinion that she is an all-powerful witch would most likely be wrong. In all actuality, she is extremely intelligent, and powerful magically, but she also has a problem with her self-esteem. Otherwise, she would not act like she does. I know-I used to be like her-a little know it all that didn't seem to have anything going for her but her mind. I think that she would do what she has to do, if only to remain in the one world that she knows the most about. After all, what does she know about the muggle world anymore except the culture. She would have no training-and no one from the magical world would be able to provide the references for her to be able to make a living in any way except for maybe waitressing or the like. I think it would be more OOC if she were to run away and do that.

    That said, I would suggest maybe a little bit of back story that would explain why she went through with the marriage instead of doing what most of the other MLC fics do in having her be petitioned by Severus. Personally, I think this is great and can't wait to read more.
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  • From WitchatHeart77 on July 13, 2006
    lol well, yes i can see why a couple of you don't buy it.. however if you will notice the last line, she will get to that soon enough... you also have to realize that once she is in malfoy's possession there are things he could probably do to her, not to mention that there might be stipulations to their marriage to ensure that she acts the part of the happy little housewife or die. trust me.. i know what i'm doing.. come back and see what happens next chapter.. i already have it half written and it will be much much longer i promise.
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  • From ANON - darker_urges on July 13, 2006
    omg! effing awesome. please, please write more.
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  • From ANON - JulietS on July 13, 2006
    Sorry I just don't by it. Hermione is way OOC here. She is such a strong and confident person that she would put up a fight no matter what.
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  • From SorceressFujin on July 13, 2006
    OO! Excellent start to the story! I cannot wait for the next chapter, I hope you update quickly. :)
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  • From ANON - MarriedtoaSnapeClone on July 13, 2006
    Sorry- but I just don't buy that an intelligent, powerful witch would just meekly go along with such treatment, either by the Ministry of Magic or by a Malfoy. People don't have to just be victims. There are always alternatives- and a woman doeasn't have to wait for a man to rescue her (which is where I presume this is going).
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  • From ANON - angel on July 13, 2006
    wow .. please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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