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By : WitchatHeart77
  • From ANON - Nightmare on January 13, 2007
    Dark Love: The finally line of the birth chapter reads: "Severus handed the baby back to Hermione, silently and stealthily refreshing the charm, and bid good evening to the new family." Why would he have to _refresh_ a charm, unless he'd _placed_ a charm in the first place? What was the question at hand?

    Note how he refused to answer her questions as to the baby's hair color. Note, also, he had plenty of time and opportunity to place said charm before he gave the child to her. This is Severus the Slytherin God here... he mulled over the situation and determined what his best advantage was while she was in the process of giving birth.

    Let Lucius think it's his, for now. If / when Emilia/Hermione wins the election, and she gets the law overturned, she'll be free, and the baby's hair will "gradually turn" to it's natural dark color. As his resemblance to his real father grows, it will no longer matter; She'll be beyond the reach of Malfoy.

    Sorry if I'm spoiling your fun, Wicked. =)
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  • From ANON - PhantomsRose on January 13, 2007
    I love this fic, this is excellenty excicuted...lol...you totally pulled a bind over my eye with Hermione being that woman...but that won't pass I know who the real father is ^_-...love it!! Update tommorow!! :P
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  • From ANON - DarkLove on January 13, 2007
    GREAT Chapter *Starts re-reading chapters to find that clue* Any hints would be nice ;) Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - MsVanessa on January 13, 2007
    MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *hangs head in shame* I should have had more faith in my writer! You're brilliant... as usual.
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  • From ANON - Tabi on January 13, 2007
    I sure wish that baby wasn't Lucius...Maybe the baby got blonde hair from Miones history..That would work I have scene it..LOL wishfull thinking I guess. I really can't wait for mione to give it to lucius..I cannot believe though I never picked up that emelia was mione. God I need slapped..

    well keep up the good work.....

    Until next chapter........Tabi
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  • From ANON - Nightmare on January 13, 2007
    Oh, Severus, how sneaky of you... to charm the boy's hair blonde... What? No one else caught that? I did, and I figured that she was Hermione.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 13, 2007
    wow .. this is awsome im sad the child is not sev .. but ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel

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  • From SorceressFujin on January 13, 2007
    Excellent chapter!!! I had wondered if Emily was going to end up being Hermione, but wasn't sure. Great great great chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - OoOojabab on January 12, 2007
    OOOOOOOOHHHHHH.....this chapter was wonderful, I loved loved loved loved loved LOVED the name switch, I was waiting for something to give and IT DID!!!!! I think you read my mind as how this story should have went, wonderful imagery (the detail of the hair barrett~wonderful) and the lemony goodness wasn't cheap or tawdry....FANTASTIC
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  • From ANON - DarkLove on January 12, 2007
    You know I love this story but each chapter KILLS ME!!! Well at least it keeps me comming back, right? Please update soon.
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  • From SorceressFujin on January 12, 2007
    Excellent chapter! :) Oooo, slip of tongue indeed. Hmm... anyway, waiting eagerly for the next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - msvanessa on January 12, 2007
    I like this story. A lot. But I don't get Snape/Emilia. At all. I'm terribly interested to find out if theres an actual point to him being with her... other than a smut chapter. (Not that I dislike smut chapters, don't get me wrong!)
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  • From ANON - witch on January 12, 2007
    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    OMG!!!!!!!!! I literally swore in anger when this.."thing" happened!!! Severus!! OMG....He really disappointed me here...poor Hermione...
    Just tell me now pls, even just hint, will everything change to the better??! PLS!!! Otherwise I am not sure my heart will stand to read the rest of the chapters..*sniff*...

    P.S: I really despise Emila (whever her name is) now...

    An awesome story by the way!!! Love its originality!!

    Cheers,

    witch

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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on January 11, 2007
    Lol love it !

    *waves hot branding iron in direction of a rather savage plot bunny that is trying to force thru it's cage*

    Try it and my initals will forever be branded on your fluffy white arse, same goes for any flamers!

    *is slightly branding iron happy*

    Update soon! I must have more, More I tells ya!

    Poor Hermione not having an easy life is she?

    *smirks*

    Oh Lucy boy....I have a present for you *chases lucius with branding iron, targeting his left buttock*


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  • From ANON - Tabi on January 11, 2007
    Well this is getting very interesting. Wonder when we are going to find out how mione and that lady are related. You need to tell that plot bunny to run away and hide.LOL...This is getting very interesting I still dont like Lucius I want him to disappear really bad...

    Anyway keep up the good work I keep checking for a new chapter...

    Until next chapter...Tabi
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