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Reviews for Hermione's Detour

By : lpicw
  • From ANON - Anon on September 18, 2006
    I'm really sorry but I have reported this story to the mods. It doesn't belong in this section.
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  • From ANON - Nemesis on September 18, 2006
    I personally feel you know little or nothing about BDSM. You seem to be a novice to the lifestyle. You appear to be a Wannabe. However, excluding your lack of knowledge of BDSM training and culture, you story is interesting and could actually have a plot - if you so choose it. I won't actually 'rate' you story, as I think it deserves very few stars and must admit that I would be quite surprised to discover that you are legally permitted to be an author of this site.
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  • From ANON - Jesse on September 18, 2006
    Wow, Hermione goes from 0 to having no personality in 60 seconds. You know why this story has a low rating? It's not because someone messed with the ratings, it's because this story blows.
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  • From ANON - ^_^ on September 17, 2006
    more. i want to know what happens. updat please ^_^
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  • From ANON - LupinsLady67 on September 16, 2006
    This was a good chapter. I was getting a little freaked out about the whole house elf thing. I couldn't wait for Draco to get back. Now I can't wait to find out Hermione's reaction when she wakes back up. I've been following the story since the beginning and have been enjoying it. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - hmmm on September 15, 2006
    all this brutality its kinda yuk. maybe put some nice things in it and explain your story better. seems like u are rushing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 11, 2006
    wow, i thought she was smarter then that
    i thought it was a bit obvious, lolz
    update soon
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  • From ANON - Dylan on September 11, 2006
    Draco's back. Finally!!!!!
    Not sure why he chose to reveal his identity though. Perhaps we'll find out later.
    Will Hermione start fighting off his advances now she knows?
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  • From ANON - lexy Malfoy on September 11, 2006
    Yay! Another update. And you brought Draco back. GUH...I love submisive Hermy. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - LupinsLady on September 10, 2006
    I'm loving it so far. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - ^_^ on September 09, 2006
    When does dracon come back? and i want to know the rest of the story i like this story it is good and man that tippys he mean

    I LIKE THE STORY UPDATE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - maevenly on September 07, 2006
    You know- I really debated whether or not I should review or not. I really hemmed and hawed over this. After all, if I don't like something, then I don't have to read it, right? With that being said, I have to tell you that the reason why I am writing this review is to make sure you know that you are giving out the WRONG PERCEPTIONS of the BD/SM lifestyle. Do you even live in the life-style? Do you know that 'punishments' and 'trianing sessions' are not what changes a slave's personal logic? Do you know that it is trust, and faith and the pure level of exchange and commitment between a master and a slave that allows for such deep levels of degragation and ecstacy to exist at the same time?

    Yes, this is fan fiction and yes, anyone can write what they want. But your grammar is atrocious. Your plot line is ridiculous. If you had alluded to Hermione having the inclinations to being intrigued by the lifestyle, or fantasizing about submitting and being dominated, then that element would make your story plausible. FIX YOUR SPELLING> FIX YOUR GRAMMAR> DO YOUR HOMEWORK.

    PAIN - consenual pain - can be a factor between a master and slave. NON CONSENUAL PAIN IS RAPE. DO you undestand that? If you do, then you must adjust your disclaimers to add rape to the list of items included in your fic... You must also include an AU disclaimer because all of your characters are acting out-of-character.

    I really feel bad for the people you are giving a mis-guided view of the BD/SM lifestyle. I have to tell you, because of your perceptions and grammar/spelling errors, I have a hard time believing that you are even of age to be on this site. I think the mods should check your author application.

    If you have any thoughts you would like to share with me, please feel free to contact me.

    Maevenly


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  • From ANON - pinkwands on September 05, 2006
    Hi there I am going to be brutally honest with you, this story intrigued me at the start about the first 2 chapters, then this elf thing has just gone on and on and on and it's abit boring and pointless. I think you probably could have done two chapters tops with the house elf and that's about it and get into the meat of the story, maybe you should have put this in the general section rather than Hermione/Draco since there hasn't been any HG/DM yet and it is abit disappointing. Please take this for what it is constructive critisism :)
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  • From ANON - Laura on September 04, 2006
    Please make your chapters longer!!!!!!!!!! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Dylan on September 04, 2006
    Wasn't impressed with ch 8. It just seemed silly.
    The first 2 or 3 chapters were good, now it's just like, stick her in a chair/on a table and whip/poke/fondle her.

    There's too much house elf in this story.
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