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Reviews for Hermione's Detour

By : lpicw
  • From ANON - Redlightspin on July 15, 2006
    wonders if they have those for men too
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  • From ANON - Amy on July 14, 2006
    Wow! what a start. I can't wait to see where this goes. Hope you will update again soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 14, 2006
    I'm most definately looking forward to the next chapter. BTW, my firends were curious if the clit-ball exists?
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  • From ANON - T on July 14, 2006
    This is really good so far and you should continue it,
    but there are alot of grammar mistakes and a few spelling ones too.

    You really need to re-read your work because as great
    as this story is you need to use the correct tense because sometimes
    you write in the present and then it goes straight to the past.

    So please check so it makes complete sense!

    But other than that I really like this story!

    GOOD LUCK WITH THE NEXT CHAPTERS!

    love T
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  • From ANON - Ashlee on July 14, 2006
    i love this story !
    update soon !

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  • From ANON - Stag on July 14, 2006
    It was only one chapter and I have only one feeling: gasp, that was hot.

    Update!
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