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By : mylovesagar
  • From Jicky on May 11, 2007
    i am interested in seeing how the bonding *cough-smut-cough* scene would be XD

    it's unfortunately that you might not be updating in a long time.
    but i hope you will finish the story as it is somewhat nicely written, with a few awkward phrasing n typos here n there that could be easily fixed.

    well i guess i'll check in from time to time to see if there's any new chapters.
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  • From on May 06, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SO I LOVE THIS STORY.
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  • From on May 06, 2007
    NO IT IS NOT AND FOR SOMEONE WHO DOES NOT HAVE TO WRITE AND TALK IN ENGLISH YOU ARE DOING A VERY GOOD JOB.
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  • From AnyaGrace on May 05, 2007
    I really LOVE your story! Keep up the awesome work, you're doing great! I am really sorry for your loss. Just so ya know (from writer to writer) you don't have to please anyone but yourself with your story. If you like it others may like it or they may not but as long as you're happy with it no one else's opinion matters! Do whatever you want with your stories, you're doing a fantastic job! Can't wait for more!
    AnyaGrace
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  • From dianahuntresss on April 19, 2007
    I am sorry for you loss...
    I am also very glad you are back. I really like this story but there's a bit
    I don't seem able to comprehend...

    Is harry giving his power to his two mates? Because it sounds to me that because of his upbringing
    he is unable to handle the influx of his magical inheritance and needs his soul mates so that they can shunt the power away from him... they get it he doesn't? Am I understanding this right?

    Thanks.. hopes for another update soon!
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  • From laurenlouisa on April 16, 2007
    Hi, I like the disection your story is taking. It is good. I think you need to reply less on very formal coversations and put a little more thought and feelings into the plot. Also in some parts its very 'this happened then this happened and then this happened'. By padding out your story with some emotion this will happen less. I like the length of this chapter and the sad look between Lucius and Severus has me very interested! Keep up the writting and the good plot development.
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  • From sanda on April 15, 2007
    good story
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  • From soloflamelady on March 25, 2007
    I do like where this story was going but it is a little rushed I'd love to see more interaction with the characters. please do update I'd love to read more
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  • From Ecks on February 05, 2007
    I am really liking the story so far and i hope you continue with it
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  • From ANON - Kat on January 08, 2007
    I'm enjoying your story very much, thank you. I hope Lucius goes first cos I do agree with Sev's reasoning, but that's just me, I'd be interested in different reasoning too. I can't wait for more.

    Hugs

    Kat
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  • From ANON - pony on November 24, 2006
    more pretty please. need more. want more. must have more.
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  • From ANON - Vittani on November 20, 2006
    id say sev, harry knows him better. good story by the way, please update.
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  • From ANON - dawolfe on October 30, 2006
    I really like you story can't want to find out how well these three get along together.
    UP DATE SOON!!!!
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  • From ANON - L'etje on August 25, 2006
    keep going and post soon bye bye
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  • From ANON - manx on August 12, 2006
    I forgot something. As to the first time, they should BOTH be in the bed with Harry doing things to him and Severus should be his first, because Harry has trust issues with Luc and sorry, but they wont go away in less than a week!
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