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Reviews for What About Blaise?

By : roozie
  • From ANON - Rose on December 18, 2006
    I liked this fic, but just a general tip: You might want to read over it again to catch some of your mistakes. For example, review your french, most of it was all wonky. Also, make sure that when you have a new character speaking, to indent. Check to make sure that you capatilize the first word in your quotations. These are all things that if you were to copy and paste into any typing program, it would most likely catch for you, and will make the story more easily follow-able for the reader. Other than that, you have a great idea for a story, and I love Blaze, so keep up the good work!
    -Rose
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  • From ANON - carabella on August 05, 2006
    or u can also use ma ch
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  • From ANON - carabella on August 05, 2006
    hey, great story, but quick spell-check, its "des beaux yeux", not de, and since ginnys a girl, its ma cherie, not mon cher, other than that, fantastic
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  • From ANON - caroline on August 04, 2006
    hello just to say that I like your fic and that for the translationsare:Qui mon cher, et vous avez de beaux yeux"c'est plut
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  • From ANON - Ceres Aoyama on July 27, 2006
    I think u have a great story going! The coupling is kinda weird, but it is a great story nonetheless. I have wondered about Blaise, cuz most stories just mention him, no1 has written a story about him. So thanx, update soon!!
    JA'NE,
    Ceres Aoyama
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  • From ANON - Mena on July 25, 2006
    thats exactly what i think he should look like, not some scrawny little black boy cause thats how hes portrayed in the books/movies.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2006
    blaise is awesome and sexy
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