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Reviews for their 7th year

By : dobby
  • From Hedwigseyes on March 31, 2009
    I don't mean to sound to critical, but it was really hard to read since it didn't have almost any spacing. I know i am probably one of the few people that read Lemons and hope for a plot. I had trouble getting into the story, because I keep having to ask why things were happening. I got to say you have a vivid imagination.
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  • From bones23 on August 06, 2007
    nice story..when will be the next update?
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  • From ANON - Dorian on November 06, 2006
    The story's too cliche..
    There are tons of errors..
    And for the LOVE of god, why would Harry be having muscles like hell..
    Quidditch does not build muscles in that way... Do you know anything about training?
    Geeeez..
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  • From ANON - Micaela on September 30, 2006
    The fic is good but I think you should let double space...it's better to read.
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on September 18, 2006
    Also can you make paragraphs and leave spaces when they talk and don't forget capital letters and basic puntuation, that way I wouldn't get lost when I'm reading because the story would be spaced out.

    And if you do that the story will look longer!

    Love TiffANY!
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on September 18, 2006
    I LOVE THIS STORY!

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!

    I can't wait to see what happends next!
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  • From ANON - Dorian on September 13, 2006
    Is that really the way u thought they'd get together? Gimme a break.
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  • From ANON - Matt on August 15, 2006
    this story is amazing please update it FAST!
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  • From ANON - brandon on August 13, 2006
    very, very, very, good story.
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  • From ANON - Bubbles on August 12, 2006
    This is a decent story I like it
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