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Reviews for Bloodbound

By : writtenwithapensealedwithakiss
  • From DarkLady on September 25, 2006
    *growls* ohh I hate that adrienne I want to slap the little twat! LOL! :D I hope Severus doesn't let her be a Snape she certainly isn't worthy :D great chapter
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  • From ANON - Citten on September 25, 2006
    YEAH!! I LOVE IT WHEN THIS STORY IS UPDATED! i really could of have more of severus' and hermione's "coupling" but you will indule us next time, right? i do hope that the next update is much sooner, although i do understand lifes "little" diffuclties. i also loved thier converation it will bring them closer together in the long run. and remember if you can make this story last longer than please do so! :)
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  • From ANON - Jeni on September 23, 2006
    lmao! Go Hermione, you tell that interloper! Cool stuff, really good. Nice one! I love your Snape especially.
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  • From ANON - lisa on September 19, 2006
    Well that was interesting. Lol Hermione went a bit rough on Adrienne I think but I know how that goes. I love the story and hope you continue I have been waiting patiently for updates lol. so goodluck and keep up the good work. I liked this chappie.
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  • From ANON - Citten on September 12, 2006
    oh OUCH! thank you for the update and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!! chapter 13 took to long but it was worth it! i can't wait to see the rivialery between hermoione and adrinee (sorry bad speller w/o spell check) and how is severus going to handle it? (misgevious grin :))
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  • From Emmylovedraco on September 11, 2006
    Please update soon I'm dieing here.
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  • From ANON - FranB on September 11, 2006
    Looks Like You'll be very busy with all the important dates so close together. I know how hectic things can get an all (I'm a mother of 4 kids and we just had the last birthdayparty yesterday. I'm still tired and am now relexing a bit with reading fanfic.). I hope you'll be able to get some time for yourself between all those party's. But enough about that. Now on with the review. I like your story very much and hope to see some more chapters somewhere in the near future. You have me spellbound with this piece of writing.
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  • From ANON - angel on September 11, 2006
    that was great ..i love it and man is mione jealous.. shanair better keep is girlfriend away form is new stepmom... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - angel on August 27, 2006
    man what are they up to .. poor sev he is going to end up with nine kids... i hope mione will work with sarah and help her learn to walk .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Citten on August 27, 2006
    hehe! that last comment was funny. BUT YOU CAN'T END THE STORY THAT SOON I LOVE IT TOO MUCH!! (small note though the father's name was Sabatian not Samuel. Samuel was one of the son's names.)
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  • From ANON - Val on August 23, 2006
    What have you written, Shadowknight? I would love to read anything you've written, it must be New York Times Bestseller List caliber. Perhaps you have been nominated for a Pulitzer Prize in Literature???
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on August 22, 2006
    You need a beta and more to make this a good story. I also see from what I've read that you know little of the D/s lifestyle that you have portrayed here. There are much better examples than this story for the lifestyle.

    The technical quality of the writing is mediocre at best. Dialogue buried in paragraphs, and many other grammar problems abound.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on August 18, 2006
    Once more I have to say - good work! I think that a conversation between the two is in order as to Severus' expectations. As she pointed out, how was she to know that she was to defend the Snape name when she was taught to be silent and meek? Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - TCFellows on August 18, 2006
    Good, but now what...
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  • From ANON - reviewer on August 17, 2006
    I am sorry to say your story is quite bad...but very humorous. Thank you for making me laugh...the whole scene with Snape whipping Hermione's back to shreds for "discipline" then her running off to the hospital ward and then eventually "taking" Snape back because she "loved" him was so appalling...unless you meant for it to be parody/cliche? Your story lacks plot, characterization, and any emotional attachments between Snape and Hermione...not to mention fragmented sentences, thoughts, and disorganization. However with that being said, I commend you on having the courage to post your writings...it is very (nay, extremely) difficult being a new author and have to take criticism when it is offered in reviews. I am not trying to discourage or to disparage your story or abilities, only to offer another point of view...I would rather someone suggest extensive review or rewriting of a story I had written rather than tell me how much they "enjoyed my story or to please update more" when in actuality my story needed more work.
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