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Reviews for Bloodbound

By : writtenwithapensealedwithakiss
  • From ANON - Anon on August 01, 2006
    I hope Snape soon realises that causing someone pain will only create fear and not respect... it never does. (unless you're into spanking of course ;-) but this was way beyond consensual play)

    I do love this story! Update!
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  • From ANON - angel on August 01, 2006
    man .. sev snaped .... what will happen now ... please please please please update soon i would love to read what will happen next ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on August 01, 2006
    ohh that nasty brown cow! she needs to be put in the chair not HG! I am glad that DD is stepping in the poor love being beaten :( great chapter! I can't wait to find out Sevs reaction!
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on July 30, 2006
    great chapter!!! :) I love how you are showing the dynamics within the couple and I love ron the prat hehehe
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  • From ANON - Citten on July 29, 2006
    how cute! WRITE MORE, WRITE MORE!!! please!!!(said hopfully :))
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  • From ANON - Citten on July 29, 2006
    Yet another great chapter only one thing...could you for the flashbacks seperate them better with like stars or italics or line or something cause i seem to get a little lost. Thanks and cant wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - angel on July 29, 2006
    man ron you are stuipd... in glad sev told him off and the told each other that they love each other ... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Miroku75 on July 29, 2006
    Sweet update.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 28, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on July 28, 2006
    OMG, is Ron going to do or say something stupid again? He is always portrayed as the biggest prat. I would like to see him do something halfway mature someday. Loving the story. Thanks for the email updates! You keep writing and I'll keep reading!
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  • From silverslytherin394 on July 28, 2006
    Once again a simply marvolous chapter!! Thank You! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on July 27, 2006
    again a fabulous chapter!!! I love how you do flashbacks and have a back story to everything it is great!!!:D I think that you got the parvati and lavendar perfectly little bitches they are... perhaps HG can get a makeover to set them all straight? :D
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  • From ANON - WickedlyWanton on July 27, 2006
    I am glad that someone had taken the initiative to continue on with 'Contracts.' I really enjoyed it, but when I went back to try to refresh my memory on it, I could not find it. However, I do remember enough about it to follow what you are doing in this.

    There are a couple of things that I think you might want to do. One would be to have more than one beta reader look it over, or at least have your beta reader look at it again just before posting. There were not any spelling errors that I could see, but your punctuation usage could be improved. Also, your transitions from story to flashback are a little confusing.

    This is just what I have seen in reference to the writing of the story. The content is pretty good, but one of the reasons that I had wanted to refresh my memory on the original story is because Severus is not acting as I thought he should be. I don't know if it is because my perception of him has been changed since I read 'Contracts' or what. Also, you seem so rushed-like you are writing the story around the smut (which is ok, down and dirty and steamy but not really the emotional and elegant lovemaking that I would have associated with 'Contracts'). Please understand; I like this story, but mainly because 'Contracts' is gone. I think that you are doing a great job without knowing for sure what the author of the original was going for. If you wish to contact me for any reason, my email is b_monts@hotmail. I will do what I can to help out if you need it. BTW, I am a writer and a beta reader with Perfect Imagination-It's a great place to go if you need help with writing.
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  • From ANON - angel on July 27, 2006
    wow that was a great chapter .. i hope ron does not do same thing stupid ...please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Miroku75 on July 27, 2006
    Great chapter! The public display of their 'couplehood' was quite satisfying.
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