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Reviews for Bloodbound

By : writtenwithapensealedwithakiss
  • From ANON - Miroku75 on July 22, 2006
    I eagerly await updates to this story. It is wonderful.

    While the flashbacks are good, I think more dialog would be useful. I would love to have heard how Hermione answers the question,
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on July 22, 2006
    *fans herself* pheeewww baby that was a hot chapter!!! hehe I love the concept of the tattoo and their minds being linked with all the family, I am really enjoying this story after I read the contract ;) update soon please? :)
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  • From ANON - angel on July 21, 2006
    wow that was wow .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2006
    I read Contracts and am happy someone is continuing it.
    What happened with the parasite; could you write more about that?
    And I do wonder where baby Sarah is, as she had bonded with Hermione and Hermione was nursing her. Is she at Hogwarts too?

    Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 21, 2006
    Hmmm I think I smell a lemon orchard coming up. Great work...keep it going!!!
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on July 21, 2006
    I too loved "contract" and I have enjoyed your first two chapters! I can not wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on July 20, 2006
    I enjoyed the first two chapters but I am a little confused over all the children, where did they come from? does he have four children and who is sarah? :D
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  • From ANON - cearrae on July 20, 2006
    Thank you for your clear and concise author's note. I got flack (via e-mail) from another author whom I criticized for not clarifying the circumstances under which she took over a story. Since you are writing an original piece, using the background and characters created by another author, I cannot see why she/he, could not be ought but flattered.

    Creative criticism - Try making your paragraphs shorter and double space your dialogue. Whe reading online, it makes it easier.

    Nice start.
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  • From ANON - The Titan Gaea on July 20, 2006
    Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! I am so happy someone picked up that story idea. I was sorry that the story line was not completed. IT IS A VERY INTERESTING TAKE on the whole Snape/Granger ship. Please do WHATEVER you need to see it through to the end.

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  • From ANON - catseye on July 20, 2006
    i am happy someone took up the story. contract was one of my favs, because it had a totally different plot. but you do rushz a bit. try to put in more dialog, scenery... it will make it smoother. bye

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  • From ANON - Citten on July 20, 2006
    First..Thank you for loving Contracts as much as I do and side note does anyone know what happened to laceyweasley Second...I am way excited to read the storys varilation that you have created and am dying to read it Third...ON WITH THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tabitha on July 20, 2006
    I am very happy to see this story continue....Contracts had ended so strangely....Keep Going!!!
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  • From ANON - septentrion on July 20, 2006
    I've read contracts to have some bzckground and it's a pity that story remains unfinished. It's good someone has taken over the task to continue it, however I feel like you've rushed the plot compared to the original story. It must be because I didn't expect the husband's name before at least 5 or 6 chapters. I'm know waiting for the following chapters to see where you're leading us.
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  • From ANON - Miroku75 on July 20, 2006
    I was a great fan of 'Contracts' and am glad to see it continuted. I can't wait to see future chapters.
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  • From ANON - L'Vanna on July 20, 2006
    I tried to email Lacey but it was kickedback to me, she seems to have dropped off the face of the www. I will definitely be reading this if you would like a beta for this story let me know, I'd be glad to help you out.


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