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  • From ANON - Julie on September 25, 2013
    Great story! It's been an amazing read! Please finish I need to know how it's going to end. You are an amazing writer!
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN29 on February 23, 2013
    she has her period so how will he sex her up with a dildo sex toy?? noone want to be touched down there when on their period!! trust me i know am female and when i am on my period i dont wanna be touched there as no woman doesnt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN29 on February 23, 2013
    THIS MISSING WORDS THING IN THIS ETC CHAPTERS AND ITS IS REALLY STARTING TO PISS ME OFF NOW SO MUCH SO THAT IT MAKES ME NOT WANNA READ THE REST OF THE STORY THAT I WAS ENYOYING BUT CANT ENYOY BECAUSE OF THE MISSING WORDS ETC IN THIS STORY!!!! IN THIS AND EVERY CHAPTER IN THIS WHOLE STORY!!! PLEASE FIX FIX THIS BIG BIG ANNOYING PROBLEM OR ELSE I WILL MAKE SURE THIS STORY ETC IS REMOVED UNTILL YOU FIX FIX THIS BIG BIG ANNOYING PROBLEM THAT THIS STORY HAS!!!!!

    The Morning After






    Chapter
    Nine
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN29 on February 22, 2013
    does that mean that he is bond to her too or is it just her bond to him??
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN29 on February 22, 2013
    She knew it was the potions fault that anything had been acted out, but she still remembered vaguely how Professor Snape mentioned how it worked between two people who had been previously attracted to each other.

    if thats the case then how come it worked on ron when luna didnt return his feelings??

    also what was this? Nipping at her flesh, he sank his teeth into her thigh drawing blood. The metallic taste caused him to revel in his sensory overload as he mixed it with the taste of the damp warmth of her need. Hermione convulsed around him, as Severus felt the tug of magic around them as the words left his mouth, his mind hazed by the pleasurable moans of Hermione.

    Hermiones fingers dug into his shoulders as he continued to pleasure her, oblivious to what had happened.

    Severus moved up and kissed Hermione soundly, letting her taste herself, including the faint coppery taste of her blood. Her legs twined about his waist as he pushed himself into her, the bonds of magic tightening.


    what happned? what was that magic?? and because this happened does that mean that the antidote for severus and hermione didnt work more so becayse of how hermione is feeling feelings for severus and vise versa after the antidote was takem by them both??
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN29 on February 22, 2013
    If the lust is
    acted upon the lusters will effect
    the most seriouse of side effects. The female, when
    not having the male after four hours will go into shock, and not recover until
    said male proceed to have her again. The male will suffer a strong emptiness
    and become obsessed with his lusts object.

    wont he feel any lust for her like she will for him???

    how do you make this potion?? i wanna make it too!! am serious i do!!!
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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN29 on February 22, 2013
    there is something wrong with the words missing words in this paragraph and not just in this parapha but in the whole story there are missing words in the WHOLE story!!! what is going on?? why is that happening please correct this BIG problem!!! see below and read the whole story again and correct this BIG problem that it has a its so annoying!!!!!!!

    He let his hands explore the body next to him, feeling where her legs
    were, the soft curve of her thighs, her face. style='mso-spacerun:yes'> He could feel her rounded nose, and his
    fingers gently brushed across her soft petal like lips. Feeling hungry he
    leaned over and kissed her mouth, his thoughts decidedly evil for this sleeping
    angel beside him. He felt
    her move under him, still deep in sleep. style='mso-spacerun:yes'> He let his hands continue to drift over her
    body, his face burying itself into the nook of her neck, attaining the scent of
    her.

    Before him stood the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. Her school robes
    were slightly rumpled, her book bag hanging off of her shoulder and he was in
    shock at how he had never noticed how incredibly sexy Miss Granger could be. style='mso-spacerun:yes'> He felt his cock stiffen up as his incredible
    desire to take her then and there seemed to take over his body. He felt angry
    at himself. Since when had he ever been attracted to Miss Granger? He blamed
    the lust potion, trying to squash the thought that that was only half of the
    reason that he felt a mad desire to shag Miss Granger senseless atop his desk.

    Looking into her heady eyes, he gently teased her lips with his,
    nibbling her lower lip, his eyes locked onto her brown ones. style='mso-spacerun:yes'> He could feel her trying to deepen the kiss,
    but he playfully refused her, awaiting her answer.



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  • From ANON - ALANRICKMANFAN29 on February 22, 2013
    naughty snape, as a teacher snape should have told others what was happening to those who the potion came in contact with to get a cure into them!!

    also he cumed too quickly why??

    He could feel her body ease, as he moved his hand down to play with her
    clitoris. Gods she was tight, and her moans
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  • From DB1 on September 16, 2011
    @31 amazing story!!! you need to update soon!! cant wait to read what happens next!!

    *DB*
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 22, 2009
    RE: chapter nineteen

    It is my belief that the old crazy lady is his mother. I thought that she had died. Interesting plot twist.
    :D

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on May 22, 2009
    Brilliant story.
    :D

    I love how passionate they (Severus and Hermione) are together (for each other).
    ;~D

    It may not be obvious to them, or they may not have yet admitted it to themselves, but I do believe that they love each other.

    Well done--keep up the good work!
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  • From suzanbones on January 03, 2009
    PLEASE update this story! I just reread the entire thing and I really want it to be updated. Please please PLEASE do!
    xx
    suzz
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From thedarklordspet on October 30, 2008
    you realy need to update this story you do a great job but you need more frequent updates
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  • From thedarklordspet on October 09, 2008
    o come on and update
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