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Reviews for It wasn't supposed to be like this

By : SimplyBulisen
  • From SlashySnitch on November 18, 2006
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    OMG, YOU SAID YOU HAD UP TO CHAPTER 14 WROTE, SO WHERE IS IT?!?! I WILL FIND YOU!!!

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - s and s blah on November 14, 2006
    Ron's a prat. I can't believe him, I'm starting to think that he is just pretending that he likes Harry now just to keep Harry away from Draco, but I could be wrong keep writing and prove me right or wrong. Thanks so much for the entertainment
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  • From ANON - tash1021 on November 13, 2006
    who the hell would do that???!!!!!!! they were about to kiss!!!
    oh it better no be ron!!! that jerk
    grrrr

    *clears throat*
    i was a very good chapter
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - kolgrim on November 12, 2006
    I was happy to see the update and happy to read it =)The story is cute, even with the angst. I love angst in a story and I also love the cuteness. hehe.
    So, hm... Might Ron have feelings for Harry? Might he be jealous?... Will read and find out. :)

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  • From ANON - jenny on November 11, 2006
    Wow... I haven't read any harry/draco lately and am really glad
    that this was the first ive read in a long time. It's really a
    great fic and I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - ensnared on November 01, 2006
    If you feel like throwing up after reading this story, where Harry takes advantage of Draco, go here:

    http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3056301/1/
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  • From ANON - tash1021 on November 01, 2006
    oh my god it great please continue
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  • From ANON - Jan on October 29, 2006
    Love this story, I can't wait till your next update.
    PLEASE LET IT BE SOON.^_^
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  • From ANON - Phoenix 5 on October 28, 2006
    Hi, I'm currently reading your story, and I must say that when I read this chapter (the fifth), that you made Ginny talk with hermione and Luna, because in the second or third chapter you've written that Ginny died in Harry's arms. I think that you forgot that ...
    I like this story and am curious about what come next, so I'll read the next chapter right away. see you soon
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  • From SlashySnitch on October 28, 2006
    I hope you update soon; I absolutely love your story. Eh, I need to work on my story...Lol.
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  • From ANON - Lilium on October 28, 2006
    Hi! I'm liking the story!
    To be quite honest I was a little squicked when i read about Harry's crush on Ron, but the story is written really well and I can't wait to read the next chapter of it.
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  • From SlashySnitch on October 27, 2006
    OMG!

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    I love your story, and it's getting great! Please update, like...now!
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  • From ANON - doesitmatter on October 27, 2006
    great story.
    update soon
    cause i need more.
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  • From ANON - Tsurusaki Eiri on October 27, 2006
    Grammar, shrammar! (Eiri, that's not a real word -_-') My first language isn't even recognised so nevermind it. Love the idea! Gosh, it's depressing though and I do hope things pick up and Harry gets some sense knocked into him. Always rather saw him as a emotionally stronger person but this is interesting too. Have hope harry! (and a bit of sense-who in blazes turns down the Slytherin Sex God? LOL-ahem)

    Anyway, I about the grammar, just get a Beta-reader? There's an error you make about the 'to' and 'too'. Try listening to how it would sound like when you say 'I'm going to the movies'; notice that it sounds short? And when your friend says 'I want to go too' notice that he'll make it sound a tad longer? Hehe, well, it's not important (to me) but it is a consistent error. Just keep an eye open yea?

    Love the story! Don't give up writing this pretty please (that's even more depressing)

    ~Eiri.
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  • From xvshadowsqueenvx on October 18, 2006
    I'm hoping to see more of this story soon.

    Lily of Darkness
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