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Reviews for Inevitability

By : skydreamer22
  • From ANON - frozenrose on September 10, 2006
    Hi! Your story is sooo full of ANGST! I love it yet at the same time I feel so incredibly bad for Harry. I hope things perk up for him in the future.
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  • From ANON - Kyriss on September 07, 2006
    Wow... powerful. When will the next installment be??
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  • From ANON - jolene on September 05, 2006
    I love the way Harry is fighting. I hope you are going to update soon, I'm on pins and needleds as to whether Harry goes ahead and gives in.
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  • From ANON - Lady Jueglerr on September 05, 2006
    *Frantically Sobs*

    POOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR Harry!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on August 30, 2006
    I'm intrigued. I love the idea of Ron and Hermione being on Draco's side but not sure why they'd go to such extremes without talking to Harry about why he should accept. Draco seems to be a total prat in this, much as in canon really, - would he not be trying to convince Harry to accept him rather than bludger him into it though? interested to see what happens next - will everyone love Harry again once he does what they want? Your Harry seems to be canny but when will he get a clue and tell them all to go to hell and disappear for good (I think he'd run away given the way you've written him a slight chance of getting away without getting caught and this scenario).
    I'm presuming Harry's been either abused or raped in this story - from his reactions to being touched - hope that you're not going to make it good for him and not all non-con, he seems so sad and in need of love and caring.
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  • From ANON - lonelyreverance on August 23, 2006
    as broken as you have made harry after reading both your hp fics you shattered and surpassed all my expectations for the hp fandom! I don't know if I can beg prettily enough for you to update sooner but if I can just give me a ring and I shall abase myself at your feet!
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  • From ANON - j.s. on August 20, 2006
    I can't believe you ended it there! I hope you write soon! :)

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  • From ANON - Dominic on August 20, 2006
    Yesss. Updates for me. I have come to the conclusion that you are writing this story for me. It has to be the only explanation. It's too perfect to be otherwise. I LOVE you! Would you bear my children? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Dragon on August 20, 2006
    One of the most original fics I've read about HP/DM being mates. Keep up the good work. I'll be watching you!

    Jeez, that didn't sound creepy at all. *sarcasm*

    Hugs!
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  • From ANON - ParalyticDawnfire on August 20, 2006
    This is like a quote I read on deviantART once (yes, I saved it):

    "...I wanted to believe as I watched your world crumble in your hands, I wanted to believe as you raised a glass to your last stand, I wanted to believe you would win... the war in your head that I did not understand..."
    -Farean

    There are so many signs he gives out, signs seen through his 'facade'. But I guess only another victim would see it, unless you're in the person's head, like we readers are. And then the other victims wouldn't say anything, because they'd be just as afraid.

    What will the planet do when they discover his secret? How will he survive being Draco's mate? Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - tellnoone_noonetells on August 20, 2006
    wow... That was just...wow... You wrote thatso beautifuly... How can such a twisted story have a beautiful feel to it... I love angst storys, and mate stories, but this story.... it takes the cake... You are just to good at this... My heart feels kinda tight from reading this, but in a good way! I hope you update soon! I cant wait to see how Draco will react.
    ~T.N.O.N.O.T.~
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  • From ANON - fatchixrock2 on August 19, 2006
    ...................... YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - T-chan on August 19, 2006
    A truly novel take on the creature-fics universe. The characterizations are very well done and the narrative flows smoothly. I specially like how very well portrayed are Harry's emotions. At times, I can fell my heart ache in time with his, and in this last chapter I would have loved to shake some sense into several people, mainly Harry's so called friends, though it made for a refreshing reading for once to see Ron getting mad at Harry for *not* accepting Malfoy. I hope in the future you'll explain more in depth why everybody at Hogwarts reacted so badly to Harry's rejection of Malfoy, since it made for a very intense, useful and original plot tiwst.

    I'm very glad to have come across this story and will look forward to more. Great job!
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  • From ANON - Lioncourt on August 19, 2006
    I LOVE this! It's ****ing brilliant! Please please please update!
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  • From ANON - Astranine on August 17, 2006
    I don't mind cliffhangers... really... as long as you UPDATE QUICKLY! OK, now you know I'm frustrated, I'll get on with it: Finally, someone's working on a story where Harry doesn't just cave! I love creature fics and soul bond fics but there are times when Harry's portrayed as having no more backbone than, well, a limp noodle!

    The concept is really good; I'd really like to see more of this story soon. Did I mention soon? Sorry. Back on track. I can really see Malfoy being such a jerk, actually. Typical spoilt-brat behaviour, make someone else get what he wants instead of working for it himself. Snape is well done, too, biased against Harry and favoring Malfoy, so he doesn't really care that it might not be something Harry wants. Harry is exactly what one expects of someone that had been abused as a child, physically and/or sexually, the panic attacks he experiences very well written. I can see him cutting his losses and running if they pressure him too much - that'd be interesting, seeing them searching all over the world for him - or maybe researching the legal ramifications for himself and tying everyone up in red tape, which would probably be even more interesting. Imagine Malfoy trying to court Harry with a Ministry appointed chaperone! Anyway, overall very good characterizations.

    The slight mystery behind Harry's behaviour is well-done, too. You know there must be something really bad in his past that probably had something to do with the Dursleys, but really the only thing known for sure is that he can't stand people touching him; and that he's managed to hide it this long. Will there be a big shocking revelation? Who will end up knowing what? It's all very exciting in a tense, "when will know?" kind of way.

    Good sentence structure; no blindingly bad spelling mistakes and actually read-able (which, considering the level of schooling most kids are getting is actually novel... kind of scary, huh?); your ideas and the story line flow from one to the next without the sense that someone has cut and paste the story all over the place. Two thumbs up!

    Anyway, now that I've blabbed enough... good luck writing in the future, and update soon please! (Pretty Please?)

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