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Reviews for The Lost Rose

By : Aeolua
  • From ANON - Bria on July 27, 2006
    If you do not write more, I swear on my sister's grave I will find you!! It has the potinetial to be a... awesome is so over used and good just doesn't cut it... to be a magnifisent story!! I could beta but it would be my first attempt so you might want someone more experienced, huh? Well, whatever. It was great. Post more!
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  • From ANON - Nuka on July 25, 2006
    You might want to proofread your chapters before you post them. There is several grammatical inconsitancies and spelling errors. Other than that it seems to be a half-way decent storyline.

    All the best,
    Nuka


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  • From ANON - Jess on July 25, 2006
    I think I'm going to be sick. But other than that your imagery was good enough
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  • From ANON - Hambares on July 25, 2006
    Nice start! But you are right. Longer please!!!
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  • From ANON - Talnae on July 25, 2006
    Well that was short...
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  • From ANON - miki on July 25, 2006
    They have a adultfanfiction.net Beta list in Yahoo groups. you really need one. it's a very depressing start. but keep working hard at it. you might want to read over your own work before posting it. you might catch your own errors such as miss spelled words and the like. Well i will keep readng. poor harry and i got a bad mental image with veron so now i need to go find some nice happy things to get that out of my head... gah.. here is the link for the beta site.

    http://groups.yahoo.com/group/AdultFanFictionBetaReaders/

    Miki
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