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By : ZooArmy
  • From ANON - Madamdragon(not signed in) on July 27, 2006
    I made it that far! Loved it btw! Update fast please...does harry like draco?...i cant tell im a lil out of it today, but hurry and put some juicy-ness in it please I cant wait! Hurry up i cant wait...*whines*
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  • From ANON - ningchan on July 27, 2006
    wanker, bastard, cock, twat, tit(to call someone)
    bollocks (literally balls or damn)
    bugger (literally sex up the arse or again, damn)
    bloody hell
    poof (literally gay)
    *grins* hope these words help out a bit *grins*
    keep it up dude!
    ning
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  • From ANON - Voodoo on July 27, 2006
    Weee awesome story, and you have no reason to complain about your English, its better than alot of peoples! lol. Pleeease write more, this story is great, like the way you have both Harrys thoughts and Dracos thoughts mixed in with the way they`re speaking!
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  • From ANON - Isinuyasha on July 26, 2006
    Hey! Gef
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  • From ANON - zelda on July 26, 2006
    Such a nice story!Please,keep going with it
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  • From ANON - Laura on July 25, 2006
    Very good, so far.

    If you need any help with translating or need a beta, I speak German and English fluently. I was raised with both, so if you need help with anything just ask. I know how hard it is to write in a language you don't know as well and you often get stuck on words, you know them in one language but not the other. Happens to me all the time. It's a real pain.

    Also, wenn du irgendwas brauchst, dann kannst du mir eine e-mail schicken, macht mir nichts aus. Aber mein Deutsch ist auch nicht perfect.

    Can't wait for another chapter!
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  • From ANON - So Devious on July 25, 2006
    Insults....*thinks* Well, there alway's my all time favorites: Shit for Brains and Douche-y McFuck-face (don't ask where that one came from O.O) Anyway, I like the story. Can't wait for the next chapter ^-^


    So Devious~
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  • From ANON - Merle Spica on July 25, 2006
    Haha this is such a good idea for a fic! I have a thought who Harry's crush is ;D Please post another chapter soon, the first one was great!
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  • From ANON - Andrea on July 25, 2006
    Spitzenm
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  • From ANON - S on July 25, 2006
    I'm not a native English speaker either, so I'm a pretty crappy judge on this whole "proper language" matter. I dare say your English is pretty decent, and even though it's a little bit clumsy at times it's totally understandable through out. It's funny how your own language kinda shines through at places, especially in the thoughts of our beloved rivals'.

    All in all, the story is good as well as your spelling and grammar. Though you might wanna consider getting a beta for yourself, just to get rid of the slight clumsiness.

    Good job nontheless!
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  • From ANON - Gillian on July 25, 2006
    OMG!! You so have to update like NOW!!! I need to know what's gonna happen next!! Anyway, now that I've ranted....just wanted to say nice work and keep it up.

    Gillian aka Moonlitorion
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