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By : ZooArmy
  • From ANON - Kiwi on August 10, 2006
    I don't review every chapter, but after reading six chapters.. I feel like leaving my first review for this story now. =) Overall, I think it's a nice plot and interesting enough to keep me coming back for more.
    A few points however. In Harry's thoughts, why does he keep referring to himself as "Potter"? It's confusing at times, because the only canon character that really calls him by his last name is Draco, so it seems like Draco is talking to him, not Harry's own inner voice.
    When there are conversations with the trio of Harry/Hermione/Ron there are only sentence after sentence with quotations, and nothing specifc on exactly who is saying what sentence. Sometimes I'm not sure who of the trio is speaking. Again, just another confusion but nothing too bad.
    Breaks in between the story are a bit distracting like the "... Cliff-hanger... just kidding.." part, I don't see why it was necessary. This is a fan fic, and when your readers get into the story, it's like escaping into another world. But to have these sudden breaks of author's notes distracts the flow in the story. Again, like the "(note: Read ch01
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  • From ANON - zoe on August 10, 2006
    OOOO I want to know what Hermiones plan is. Funny chapter I enjoyed Rons comic relife.
    I cant wait for the next chapter so plz update soon
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  • From ANON - Merle Spica on August 10, 2006
    I LOVE this story. Have I said it before? I must have. Really, I've read hundreds of great H/D-fics and it's starting to get difficult to find the best of them but this is actually one of my favorites :D So please (omg i'm begging) add another chapter soon with more hot hxd-action! It was a good idea that Ron already knew about Draco (thanks to Hermione) because the SHOCKOMGICAN'TBELIEVEIT-part appears in almost every other fic nowadays :D And yeah, I don't understand why Pansy has to be the ugly slut ^_^
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  • From Isinuyasha on August 10, 2006
    Ach und danke f
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  • From Isinuyasha on August 10, 2006
    Hey hey,
    Ich kann nur wieder sagen, dass das Chap klasse war und ich bin echt gespannt, wie sie Harry 'into Draco's pants' kriegen wollen xD Normalerweise w
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  • From In2Deep on August 10, 2006
    Thats a good resolve that his friends have come to but dosent harry want draco to get into his pants? ... any who up-dates soon!
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  • From ANON - massie on August 09, 2006
    your story is the best one i've read in awhile!
    keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Jinngles on August 05, 2006
    Acyually to tell you the truth i think she will kill harry off in the end...

    My Scenario: Harry is a hourcrux and thus has to kill himself to destroy voldemort... (thats good... maybe i should write my own fic...) and if he doesn't die she will never be able to stop writeing about him.... (and she allready said he dies so........)

    nice story by the way.. can't wait till you post more n.n
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  • From ANON - Voodoo on August 05, 2006
    I am really sorry i didnt review your other chapters =( *slaps hand* But really, you`re an amazing writer! I always come back to read this story cause you make the chapters so they have a little action between Harry and Draco, but its just enough to keep you coming back for more!!! Rah lol. But really, the last chapter, (No.5) is great, good story line and I like the Pansy and Draco discussion! Keeeeep Writing! =D
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  • From ANON - avihenda on August 05, 2006
    very good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
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  • From ANON - LoveGD on August 05, 2006
    Ooooohhhhh!!!! Sooooo good!!! Can't wait for more, please update soon!
    Later//LoveGD
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  • From ANON - Adrian on August 05, 2006
    I love it. I LOVE it!

    It's so rare that you find a HPDM fanfiction that has SUBSTANCE.... So often they're just smut, smut, smut! It's nice. I love your progression of events and (ESPECIALLY) the amount that Pansy is in this fic-- I *loves* her. I'm actually believing that Draco and Pansy aren't bastards, which is a new thing for me-- even though I always knew they were nifty, nifty little fiends.

    Keep it up, I can't wait for the next installment!

    Oh-- and I'm in contact with Jo Rowling, she's VERY amused by your comments.

    ~Adrian
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  • From Kiira on August 05, 2006
    I've read all your five chapters now and thought I should leave a review, because we all like getting reviews :)
    Anyway, I've been enjoying your story, Draco is so cute. Keep writting, and have a nice holiday!
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  • From ANON - l'etje on August 05, 2006
    post soon
    bye
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  • From ANON - piratekj on August 05, 2006
    I am following you story closly. I really enjoy it. well done
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