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Reviews for Dear Lily *COMPLETE*

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From sentineljandb2 on February 21, 2007
    Thanks for the gorgeous ending!

    Again, I can
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  • From Dixie50 on February 21, 2007

    "He gave me another scrutinizing look, and it annoyed me so much that I slapped him in the face"... I loved that ! Onto the next chapter !
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  • From Dixie50 on February 21, 2007
    Ch 5. oh no. the Dark Lord has turned up. I wasnt expecting that. The plot thickens !
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  • From Dixie50 on February 21, 2007
    Chapter 4
    Another good chapter.
    "
    'I used to think you were worth listening to,' echoed round inside my head Merlin how can I redeem myself."
    lovely.. I shall read more tomorrow.
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  • From Dixie50 on February 21, 2007
    Chapter 3
    Another good chapter. I found the "staring a boobs" very amusing. Draco is still a little creep. Very bold of Severus to sneak a kiss in, but he could be dead or captured at any time so "what has he got to lose ?". Also as he is no longer the Teacher then "Go for it, mate !"
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  • From Dixie50 on February 21, 2007
    WOW Chapter 2 is very well written. Changing the diary's name to Lily, made it better than "taliking to himself" as in Chapter 1. I found there was much more spark here. The "English" was more clear too.
    I look forward to Chapter 3.
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  • From Dixie50 on February 21, 2007
    Just read Chapter 1.
    It is me, aussie annie from SWARF.
    It was a strong start. Using a 'diary' format allows the inner Severus to speak frankly without having to modify his behaviour. It was great to see he is noticing Hermione. Nothing creepy yet. She is 17 and he appears to be controlling himself.
    I will read on...
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  • From ANON - i'm anonymous on January 06, 2007
    in response to your author's note on Dear Lily 19, no you are not the only one that believes that ron would be better off with luna. i have the same sentiments as you do concerning him... btw, you are the main author whose stories i read. you, and ms_figg are the only authors that i know by name. and i refer your stories to friends. :)
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on November 13, 2006
    Wonderful ending, thanks for the story!
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 13, 2006
    Great work!!! I like the idea that you didn't cure the lycanthrophy problem. I'm looking forward to your next story.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 13, 2006
    Awww!!!! I love the ending Bela. Awesaome. Lol Severus is something else. When He plots al others should be worried.lol. and all the kiddies. so cute. I love those movies too. And now Severus and Hermione have their own child together. and it's sweet that Severus has stepped in as father to greyback's children. Poor Lucius though. He met an awful end. Good ending. AS always Bella you are Awesome.
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on November 13, 2006
    Great story! And a happy ending. YEAHHHHHH! I love happy endings. But Severus is going to have his hands full every full moon. LOL. Now on to your other stories, when can we expect updates. HINT! HINT! LOL. Keep up the great work hon. Toodles.
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  • From ANON - cateye on November 13, 2006
    I loved the ending,but I wished it did'nt have to end.Your story,s are my soap operas,I love them so much,thankfully you have more for me to read.I;m so glad Severus &Hermione got to he happy in the end.Hopefully in the end of book 7 thay will get to be happy too.
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  • From ANON - juls on November 13, 2006
    I loved your ending... so romantic. Made me squee with joy. Go Sev and Hermione FOREVER. =)
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 12, 2006
    Yes Draco is a big doofus!!! I hope you feel better soon. An update today would be lovely.
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