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Reviews for Unexpected

By : autumnRose88
  • From hfreak on November 28, 2007
    Holy freaking God! Very well done.
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  • From ANON - Lina on December 15, 2006
    that was... whoa!
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  • From ANON - sticky on November 29, 2006
    11 inches, eh?
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  • From ANON - Annie on November 26, 2006
    you know my favorite thing about this one-shot was that you had harry cum prematurly. most auhors dont and seeing as harry and hermione are teens he would most likly cum before hermione. so this is very very good, keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Tina on September 11, 2006
    I would Like to see more of this story. You are a very good writer.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2006
    nice
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  • From ANON - Mena on August 23, 2006
    "Harry held her face and drew her in for a hot kiss, his hands trying to unclasp her bra. He slowly kneaded her full breasts and played with her nipple..." Interesting story, but how is it that Harry has three hands? He holds her face, tries to open her bra AND kneads her breasts all at once.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 15, 2006
    an 11 inch cock....a bit unrealistic.
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  • From ANON - CPoulsen on August 10, 2006
    very good, i thoght it was great u should write more stories like this. i read it like 5 times before i moved on to something else but i think ur an awsome writer. good luck with ur next one!! :)
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  • From ANON - brandon on August 10, 2006
    very good story.
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  • From on July 31, 2006
    If Rowling wrote hot erotic H/Hr, what would it look like? I would say you are damn close with a few tiny word changes. Great one-shot!
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  • From ANON - THX1138 on July 28, 2006
    I really like it. But, I think you should not use such rude words like "cunt" in the description of the events. This way it looks to cheap. Like a really cheap porn-movie and that is not so overly erotic. If you use it in the dialog, it's okay, but not in the description.

    BUT: Keep up the H/HR stories. There are way to few of them here.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2006
    I wasn't going to review but Ichecked your profile and this was the only story I saw so I thought I would let you know you did a good job.
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  • From ANON - Mark on July 27, 2006
    This was really good.
    I'd like to read other stories done by you that are H/Hr or even Dr/Hr
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  • From ANON - anjellic on July 27, 2006
    For a story without a huge plot that was really really hot. You made the sex real...Hermione not getting off the first time. Having Harry be that attentive with her to try again was wonderful. :O)
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