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Reviews for Hold Me Close

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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 19, 2006
    Aww little whiny Herimone - those hormones are killer.
    And Severus is still fluffy. Brr.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 19, 2006
    Random sex scene.. hmm hmm still not sure if I like Severus all nice and wooly.
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 19, 2006
    URgh. Severus' letter is too sentimental for me. >.>
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 19, 2006
    8 weeks! Oh noes. And what's this note about?
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  • From ANON - Queen Celestia on September 19, 2006
    PREGNANT?! le gasp.

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  • From ANON - Citten on September 19, 2006
    honey thanks for the chapter and feeding me! was a little sad to the shortness but all will be redamed if the next chapter is fast in coming. also know how bussy family and life stuff can get in the way so no worries, looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - angel on September 19, 2006
    wow that was great .. i hope ron does keep it a secret... please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From SorceressFujin on September 19, 2006
    Excellent chapter, awaiting the next.
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  • From Emmylovedraco on September 10, 2006
    Pleaseeeeeeeee,please update soon I love it it's getting good.
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  • From ANON - Bela on August 27, 2006
    Wonderful story! I'm thinking that Hermione's mom & Molly Weasley have their suspicions about Hermione's condition already. I know that your latest chapter (9, I think) wasn't dealing with that, but since I read this all in one shot....

    Anyhow... Thank you for sharing this story! I would be happy to read more of it should time, life, and your muse permit an update.
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  • From ANON - Shadowknight on August 25, 2006
    Not bad, not bad at all. Overall, the writing is good, with few errors that I can see. Formatting, grammar, and spelling are quite above par, and any errors aren't noticeable due to above average story flow. It is nice to see that there are those out there that paid attention to their lessons in school. :)

    I do hope that Hermione will be able to resolve things with Ron. Sounds like Ron was being a prat though. Hermione, then Lavender, than back to Hermione? What is wrong with this picture? In this case it looks like Ron was just looking to get laid with whoever would put out for him. Nice complex interrelationships going, and I commend you.

    I shall be looking forward to chapters ten and beyond.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on August 18, 2006
    Okay - loving the story, but I am having trouble with one thing. I CANNOT wait for the next chapter! Please, please, please update soon.
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  • From SorceressFujin on August 18, 2006
    OoO! Exciting chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - angel on August 17, 2006
    wow that was great ..hmm what dose is will say ..and what memories did he leave for them ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more.... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Citten on August 17, 2006
    Sweet i would love an update when possible thank you!
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