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Reviews for Hold Me Close

By : writtenwithapensealedwithakiss
  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2008
    Boy do you have balls, Snowhite....Not a single story under your belt and you have the nerve to criticize this story in such a way that can ONLY be described as a flame through and through. If you didn't like the story, you shouldn't have read it. And to have the gall to claim you're sorry if it "sounds" like a flame? Cheap and tacky. If you're so "versed" in how this story should be, then perhaps you ought to have a shot at writing it yourself.
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 08, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 09, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Snowhite77 on June 29, 2008
    Oops... I meant, MY opinion
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  • From Snowhite77 on June 29, 2008
    Please, do not take offence by this comment, but Hermione acts like a greedy whore in this story. She's frighteningly OOC and enjoys being fucked by both Severus and Ron. Seriously, this is completely absurd, and there isn't a single chapter that makes sense.

    I suggest you keep an eye on the characters next time you write a fic, 'cause they were ALL Mary-Sues in this story. It's a pity, for this fic could have been a really good one if you had not fucked it up the way you did.

    I'm sorry if this sounds like a flame, but I'm just voicing your opinion.
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  • From ANON - Erica on September 23, 2007
    When is this being finished????
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can please write some more chapters?
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  • From gwenivere73 on June 30, 2007
    Very good storyline, I even feel sorry for Ron. Can't wait for an update
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  • From DarqueHart on June 27, 2007
    I'll be brief - Ch. too short, want more, don't mind waiting, keep writing! [Thanks]
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From DB1 on June 25, 2007
    @21. awesome story i love it. update soon

    *DB*
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  • From ANON - Erica on June 25, 2007
    I have been following this fanfic from the start and I think it's GREAT! I can't wait for the next chapter. I check back a lot :)
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  • From catysmom1028 on June 23, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - sinbad on June 09, 2007
    Great story, I can't wait to see more.
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  • From barbarade on June 08, 2007
    Intense update. Looking forward to more.
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