Click Here!

Reviews for Claim for Life

By : firedragonsjewel
  • From ANON - DaniD on August 06, 2006
    That was WONDERFUL! You managed to lay to rest any concerns I had about Hermione's character..In this chapter, she proved her metal..and earned a bit of respect from her mates. Also, having Draco become head boy to replace Anthony was a stroke of genius ; )

    Hmm..I wonder what Lucius will have to say about Draco's new status as a Veela..and who his mates for life are? Will he try to manipulate and use them with their new powers, or will he try to kill them? Also, looking forward to seeing if Hermione has become pregnant. If she does, it will create quite a bit of angst with the war looming, and everyone else's views on their unconventional relationship. Once again, GREAT chapter!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Sapphire on August 06, 2006
    I still love your story!!!!!!! And you are a quick updater!!! Lolz; that's a good thing!!! Keep updating, please!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - kris.t!n.e on August 06, 2006
    thehehh that made me feel all warm and tingly inside.. made me soo soo happpy!... hahhaha...i love how the boys are whipped by Hermione... they had every intention of not letting her be a part of the war, one Hermione starts talking, they agree, well comprimised.... atleast Harry and Dumbledore hinted at that... Well keep up the great work .. can't wat for more!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Shardae on August 06, 2006
    I knew she would be able to make them see it her way... Add soon
    Report Review

  • From elibdally on August 06, 2006
    Hi. I totally loved your story. I LOVE Veela Draco as Hermione as his mate, and throwing Blaize in would make anyone topple over. I wish there was still an option where one can put a `fic into a favorite catagory, but oh well. Please continue soon.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on August 06, 2006
    first off have to say I'm loving this so much. i love veela fic, and a rapidly updating, trio veela fic? I'm in frickin heaven.

    But since you're not sure where you're taking this, can I make a few suggestions? I've noticed a lot of rooting for hermione in the reviews. I completely agree that Hermione (the Hermione you've created, not just talking canon) would never be able to function in a Master/slave relationship, even if she likes it in the bedroom (that would actually make sense b/c soem people who have the lots of responsiblity in their lives like to give up control in the bedroom). But Hermione would never been able to sit back and let two men make all the pertinant decisions for her life. They may want to keep her safe, they make treat her well, they may feel they know what is best for her but that is how you treat a child... it's how you love a pet not a woman. Plus I wouldn't think it would work for Blaise and Draco unlitmately either. Do they really want Hermione to be either miserable about the decisions they make for her or a simpering little kitten that needs to ask their permission to breath deeply? That wouldn't be Hermione, which would raise the question, what was it about her that made her destined to be their mate? Is it just a phyical, chemical thing that requires nothing deeper. If they really loved her, they wouldn't strip her of her free will- that would strip her of every bit of respect she'd worked so hard to earn since she got to Hogwarts, not to mension all of her self-respect. She would, what? Be in a lust-induced trance whenever they were close enough to smell and hate herself every time they weren't? If Hermione were to loose her autonomy, she'd loose herself... and then all Blaise and Draco would have is a shell to fuck. Am I wrong? Like I said, so problem whatsoever with some D/s in the bedroom. That is hot, I have to say. But D/s in real life is degrading and humiliating unless it's completely voluntary and let's face it- D and B exploited a very real chemical advantage. That's not frickin fair lol. Sorry that this story has got me so wound up but since you kept saying you're just writing without a roadmap I thought I give you some input. I've become rather attached to this and your Hermione.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - chaz on August 06, 2006
    that story was so good . update soon!!!!!

    Report Review

  • From ANON - lizzy on August 06, 2006
    im lovin so far im so glad that they finally got together i was hopin ghtat nothig bad was gonna happen..... whats gonna happen with the situation of the up coming war
    Report Review

  • From ANON - cherie on August 06, 2006
    Loved it! Chapter was great. And I still hope she can get a little more control. Like staying in the Order? (hint hint)..lol..can't wait for the rest.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Shardae on August 05, 2006
    Finally..... How long did it take for them to get together????
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DaniD on August 05, 2006
    WOAH That was HOT! lol I couldn't help but feel that the "Master's" and the "obey" was a little unfair considering Hermione was under.....ahem...duress. I wish there was a way se could gain more respect from them! Of course I think she is one lucky bitch! lol What I mean is..I was hoping they would treat her more like an equal. I can see how maybe that will be a bit of a struggle that may go on inside of Hermione. Depends how they treat her.

    Can't wait for more..Great update!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2006
    eek! That was hot! What's going to happen now? Will Luscious Lucius put in an appearance and make them choose sides in the war by threatening Hermione? Wait - there was no talk of contraception! My but those boys are in a hurry to start the family! Looking SO *SO* SO much forward to your next chapter! Don't make us wait !!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - firewall on August 05, 2006
    Well, that was freaking hot!!! I have a little problem with the "obey" part but then I did with my own wedding vows (he's still waiting to hear them) and hell will freeze over before he hears "Master". LOL I imagine that "obey" is going to cause a bit of a problem with Hermione's involvement in the Order. I expect a few fireworks then.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Empress on August 05, 2006
    This is such a sensual story but doesn't end up being a PWP fic. Excellent chracters and even better sex scenes.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Viki on August 05, 2006
    sooooooo hot thast rocked man!

    i cant wiat for more!!

    it was so hot that she submited though that will make it perfect!
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!