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Reviews for A Tale of Two Wizards

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From ANON - angel on August 11, 2006
    i hope he dose not come for her in till after she is done with sev .. please please please please upate soon i would love to read more ...later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2006
    And a long story with LV/HG would be wicked!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2006
    No, I don't think she made the siuation worse for herself; how could Snape ever be worse or a bad thing? lolol
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on August 10, 2006
    ohhh Lucius *swoooooon* heheh yes darling I think you should do a Pwp and a plot story with LV or Tom Riddle or maybe both together a nice story with abit of dirty smut heheh I also adore stories where HG gets turned to the dark side with Lucius influence hehe I have a few bookmarked if you want the URL's email me :D
    anyway back to the chapter hehe can't wait to read about Dracos reaction hehe poor old Sev abit of a sap but I love your take on him anyway hehe well done!! :D
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on August 10, 2006
    I meant CAN I have Severus. It's my keyboards fault. LOL. Toodles again.
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on August 10, 2006
    Another great chapter. Not exactly a warm welcome by Bellatrix, I hope Hermione has her wand and watches her back, and Draco is going to go batshit. The next chapter should be fun, Lol. Anyway I am British and although I don't claim to be a grammar expert (just a grammar nazi, lol) weren't and wasn't are contractions for were not and was not, and while both are perfectly acceptable words, I have found for some reason spell checks don't like contractions. Anyway the general rule is (and there are exceptions to every rule) that while both are past tense, "weren't" is generally plural and "wasn't" is singular. For example "she wasn't home" "they weren't home". I come from a long line of English teachers and this is the result of growing up and having your grammar corrected BEFORE you even said anything. Anyway I really do love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. BTW if Lucius wins and I have Severus. LOL. Toodles.
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  • From ANON - angel on August 10, 2006
    man... please please please more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - beeky63 on August 10, 2006
    I am really enjoying this story, but a word of warning! If Severus dosen't win Hermione away from Lucius. you're in big trouble! LOL. There are a few spelling mistakes that you should be aware of. 1) the word is sonata and 2) you use the word "weren't" incorrectly quite frequently, the correct grammar is "wasn't". Other than that the writting is quite good and I'm looking forward to see how the rivalry plays out. Can't wait for the next update. Toodles.
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  • From ANON - angel on August 10, 2006
    wow that was great .... poor harry i hope he does try harder to get along with snape .. and how will snape win mione back ... please please please update soon.... ohhh and that was cute to her what your sister said ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on August 10, 2006
    ok I will admit it *sigh* I love abit of smutty voldie/tom/hermione I am a deviant I submit to your smut! lol

    great two chapters...how is a girl supposed to choose between these two gorgeous men?
    hmm I know this story is far from over but for your next one a voldie/hg one? *cough* ok I'm off hehe
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  • From ANON - angel on August 09, 2006
    man .. will harry tell snape about what just happen ... please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 09, 2006
    I love this story and I love Lucius, but I feel sooo bad for Snape! Don't make him lose Hermione, please!
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on August 09, 2006
    chapter seven.. OMG LORD VOLDEMORT! LOL geez woman you are chucking in those bunnies!! love it!! mwahah love how the weasleys keep interupting Harrys uhhh intimate time with Ginny hehe
    chapter eight...*sobs* ohhh my god that was intense!! I was bawling..my husband goes to me "what are you crying over" and when I told him he snorted and rolled his eyes..pfft men just don't understand!!!

    chapter nine...OMG DARK LORD SEX EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW LOL! that is all I have to say *giggles* hehe

    chapter ten :D ohhh you know I love Lucius but I am rooting for Severus in this story... if only she knew the trouble he was going to, to save her!! :D

    wow I have had fun reviewing and catching up :D more please? :D
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on August 09, 2006
    sorry for my lack of reviews! :D hehe I was away on holidays! now back to the story I'm reviewing on chapter six hehe because I need to tell you my thoughts!! soooo fabulous so far! love the Lucius Plot bunny *giggles* he is always good for a nice blonde distraction *cough* haha

    ohh sooo sweet sev loves her and she had morning regrets about Lucius! :D love the way this is going...will review after I get to the end of the last updated
    :D
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 08, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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