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Reviews for A Tale of Two Wizards

By : Rumpelyssa

From ANON - angel on August 08, 2006
man .. poor mione .. i hope sev get there soon then she dose not have to marry him ... please please please please please update soon .. later for now

angel
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From ANON - angel on August 08, 2006
man .. poor mione .. please sev you need to get to her quikly .... and mione just keep on trying to remember him .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - anon on August 07, 2006
This story has alot of potential but the numerous spelling errors detract from it. Ex: He was circulating her body ...where we was spreading it around? Plot inconsistencies also make it difficult to read...she's chained up but he had her undressing him...quite the feat. I would love it see this fixed up it would make for quite the enjoyable read.
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From ANON - angel on August 07, 2006
wow that was heartbreaking ... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2006
You have potential as a writer but you need some work on characterization and your overuse of exclamation points.
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 07, 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ANON - angel on August 07, 2006
man .. i hope severus can get to her ... please please please update soon .. later for now

angel
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From ANON - angel on August 06, 2006
ah so that is how lucius is still alive .. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
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From ANON - Nemesis on August 06, 2006
I'd rather her be with Severus, and soon. Oh, I also like what you've done so far.
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From ANON - pinkwands on August 04, 2006
LOL! love you too champion! *giggles* great chapter, good to see Harry is still a prat hehe and gotta love Sev for protecting HG :D
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From ANON - angel on August 04, 2006
man ... i hope snape can get what he wants.. and im glad harry did not go crazy on snape when he told him about hermione .... please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 04, 2006
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ANON - pinkwands on August 03, 2006
ohhh what a sweetheart! the best he's ever had! lol beautiful!! you are doing so well with this story :D
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From ANON - angel on August 03, 2006
~lol~ that was great ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - Donavon on August 02, 2006
So who is the second wizard? Lucius is dead...where are the wizards in your ceremony?
Your story is good, however, how can the first story make sense? Two wizards ready to f.. Hermione on the Dark Lords orders. Severus makes love to Hermione. Lucius dies!!!!!!!!! where does that take your story???
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