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Reviews for Shattered hearts and broken paths

By : Magzie
  • From purefaith91 on November 20, 2010
    What about Ron? He was blatant about his attempts to rape her AND he said that it is what he would do to any girl he found up there. Not only should she have told her Dad, but some kind of action should have been taken against him. Nice to see her and Harry together and for him to recognize what she is sacrificing for him (and the wizarding world). p
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  • From purefaith91 on November 20, 2010
    Really love the story so far. One of my favorite parts is your response to Lady Lynn. I will never understand why they think that stories are supposed to follow the books. If they want to read those, surely they have access to them. Anyway, glad that this story is finished so that I will know what happens as I do not see a way out (barring LV's demise). reading on... p
    ps: I cannot review each chapter as I would like because it will cut me off and tell me that I cannot enter more at some point. sorry, but know it is not because I don't think it worth reviewing. p
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on September 10, 2009
    RE: chapters two and three

    Great story so far, however, it is riddled with many errors that can easily have been caught by a spell check, a grammar check, a punctuation check, and a good Beta reader. There were too many errors for me to list without the review taking up the whole webpage just to list them all. Sorry.
    :C

    Well, I'm off to chapter four.
    ☺
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  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on September 10, 2009
    RE: chapter one

    Ron is a scuz-bag for having cheated on Hermione--what a dumba
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  • From RandH4ever on June 29, 2008
    A red auroa appeared around the students, the oath was valid, the contracts were signed, all they had left was the initiation meetings.

    "Very well, Be here, Thursday night, We will be leaving for the initiation and marking ceremony, Remember, do not let ANYONE know anything about what is going on, You signed the contract, you made the oath, and do not treat Hermione any differently, Treat her as you have been treating Paige."

    Periods are your friends. Use them.
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  • From RandH4ever on June 29, 2008
    Spelling Corrections:

    You put "Voldermort" when it should be "Voldemort" (no R).

    You also put "Dumbledoor" when it should be "Dumbledore".
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  • From ginnyginny on April 29, 2008
    altogether, this wasn't a bad story. I do wonder what happened to hermione's muggle parents as this was never addressed. I would advise you to use a spelling and grammar check in the future. Mistakes can sometimes detract from your story line, and misspellings are SO easy to avoid.
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 24, 2008
    Ooooh!! I like it!! I know the story's almost done, but can you try your best to add a bit more Ron and Pansy into the story? Please and thank you! :D Oh, and update a.s.a.p!
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  • From JaceDamian23 on February 02, 2008

    In turn the boys all replied with similar answers, They all wanted to see their lord come out on top, rid the world of Harry Potter, and his two side kicks, the human Weasel and the know-it-all Granger


    lol funny cuz they KNOW that granger is a death eater now lol
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  • From JaceDamian23 on February 02, 2008
    awwwww this is such a good story. please continue soon:)
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  • From JaceDamian23 on February 02, 2008

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From KayTeeJay on February 18, 2007
    great story i can't wait until you update
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  • From ANON - CAR on January 06, 2007
    Your story in very interesting but you really need someone to edit it!!
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  • From ANON - Ally on December 28, 2006
    Please update really soon
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