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Reviews for CAGED

By : roozie
  • From jlclark on August 07, 2009
    Really, really great. I can not say enough so I am going to leave it this: Loved the story!!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 01, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - myself on October 09, 2006
    And here's me realizing that I sounded like a complete prat in my review.

    I was trying to be complimentary, but I just stayed up 'til 0200 to finish reading this lovely fic, so my brain is fried. It really is a splendid story.

    I'm sorry I was such a snot...

    I'll be on the look out for your other work! (Read: Tomorrow, after I wake back up and have any free time, I'm going to go hunt it down. Yay!)
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  • From ANON - myself on October 09, 2006
    First time I've actually reviewed anything on aff.net, but this merited it. I applaud your need to have a plot to go with *ahem* adult content... hehe...

    PWPs can be wonderful in their own right, but too often when stories are supposed to have plots, it just degrades into an excuse for more smut. Here, you managed an artful romance that is truly charming.

    Nitpicky grammar point though... I noticed a number of times when "your" was used where "you're" should have been. The former being the possessive and the later being the contraction of "you are."

    All in all? Bravo.
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  • From ANON - dudette on September 19, 2006
    oh and when i was reading that part about them running on the bridge towards each other i just started thinkin about that song by Aerosmith "I Don't Wanna Miss A Thing"
    don't know why. just a thought...
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  • From ANON - dudette on September 19, 2006
    hey that was so awesome but uh WHY IS EVERYONE always sayin like pussy or cock or somethin? Come on. This is romance. Use romantic language. "Womanhood...maidenhead..manhood..." something intriguing and desirable...not...pornographic.
    BUT THAT WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY!!!!!!
    KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
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  • From ANON - hollykingham on September 05, 2006
    Wow - wonderful ending. I really loved this fic - thank you for an amazing read :D
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  • From ANON - ScarlettWynter on September 02, 2006
    That was an absolutely beautiful story!
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  • From ANON - jenny on August 24, 2006
    aaaaaaaaaaaw, that was the sweetest thing ever (without being disgustingly sweet)
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  • From ANON - Bella Snape on August 19, 2006
    That was oh, so sweet!!!!!!! I loved the ending, true and everlasting love.
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  • From InfernalParadise on August 19, 2006
    I can definitely see why it moved you to write this final chapter as I found it very, very touching and wonderful. There were so many simple, but lovely things that felt absolutely unrushed and natural in a comfortable way that I'm once again very amazed about your talent. I will miss this story even with its sweet ending, but I still have "Pandora" and I know you'll continue. Congratulations on this, hon!! It was beautiful beyond words. :)
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  • From ANON - pinkwands on August 19, 2006
    well what can I say about this story... I sobbed my little heart out in your last chapter it was beautiful when they ran towards each other on the bridge *sniffle* hehe I sincerely hope you write some more Lucius :D
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  • From ANON - June on August 18, 2006
    Ch 10 -yay!!! Thanks for telling us what happened when he got out of Azkaban - at the start of the chapter, I was afraid you were going to gloss over that part. Glad they found each other on the bridge and built a new mansion.
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  • From ANON - June on August 17, 2006
    Ch 9 - I hope they find Voldy's body in time to save Lucius! You'll kill Fenrir so he can never get out again? Thanks for updating!
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  • From InfernalParadise on August 16, 2006
    I just saw now that you mentioned me before chapter 4 - you're welcome, hon! I really meant what I said in that review. :)
    As for now, well I already dreamt of your story last night, so that tells enough. *lol* Besides, I really, really adore your portrait of the characters you use (even Fenrir, that bastard, is well done!) plus I love your style and the choice of words. Once this story is properly finished, my heart will break, I'm afraid... ;P

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