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Reviews for broken down

By : Saladin23
  • From MacPhisto on March 20, 2010
    as much as I love the pairing, this seemed a bit cold-blooded for Harry
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on February 02, 2008
    when are you going to update?
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  • From TheSonOfJokerAndHarley on January 16, 2008
    that's some cold-blooded shit... I like it
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  • From darthme1011 on June 19, 2007
    i like
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  • From ANON - kelvin on November 19, 2006
    this si really good, I hope you can update soon.
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  • From ANON - me on September 16, 2006
    Update soon. Needs some smut though O_O
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  • From ANON - J.M.S. on September 10, 2006
    Interesting, very interesting.
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  • From ANON - phoenixgod2000 on August 26, 2006
    I really like this story. I'm a big fan of slavery stories particularly ones with the Black Sisters as the slaves. Nice bit with Harry as the feudal lord. I can't wait to see him break Bella down just like he has broken Narcissa and his other female slaves.

    might be interesting to see Hermione and Ron in the story in some capacity since she has such strong feelings about slavery of house elves. hell, maybe she went bad and Ron ended up taking her as a slave. that could be hot...

    looking forward to more please post again soon
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on August 16, 2006
    Very good so far! I definetly see alot of potential in this story. So many very enticing directions it could go :) looking forward to future chapters! and lemons?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2006
    I like this so far. Please continue
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  • From ANON - DJ32 on August 06, 2006
    It is a good setup keep it going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2006
    Would like to see more... hope you update again soon

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  • From ANON - Just Me on August 04, 2006
    Love it so far, can't wait to read more.
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