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Reviews for The Prophecy of the Phoenix

By : greenwizard11
  • From greenwizard11 on February 28, 2008
    It goes straight into the Phoenix Rises.
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  • From Jan on February 28, 2008
    Gods, still loving this story, can't wait for chapter 32.(If there is going to be one. Or does it goes straight to The Phoenix Rises?)

    Jan ^_^
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  • From Leentjef on February 25, 2008
    this is very very good storie
    please keep up the graet work and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From Jan on August 06, 2007
    OH! I liked how he parted with his body, very creative.

    Hope the people from the wizarding world aren't so stupid, as to try to part Lily and James from Harry ever again.

    Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From Selera on July 20, 2007
    ... A fallen god? Oh dear this is not good...
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  • From Jan on July 19, 2007
    OHHH! A fallen God! Poor Minister. He he... I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From Jan on July 06, 2007
    Lucius is truly a romantics. Love, that Master and Slave game James came up with. It was bloody Hot. Please update soon. ^_^
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  • From Jan on March 25, 2007
    Yey ! Harry is finally with us. Let the fun begin ^_^

    I have to say, that part you put about Severus, Lucius, Sirius and Lily being in the same room (even though it was only a visit)gave me an idea: Why not put them all in a little orgy together? ^_~

    Please update soon.
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  • From Jan on March 25, 2007
    A very nice ending for this part indeed. I can't believe that you finished this part. It's been a while. First my computer broke down, I had to wait 2 months to get it fix, only to be told that they couldn't do anything about it, I had to replace it with another. I was just looking for a fiction that had phoenix in the title and I saw Prophecy of the Phoenix 3 and I just had to come to finish it. I love this story. I am off to start on Phoenix 4. ^_~
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  • From ANON - Heather on December 11, 2006
    very well done . still waiting for more though as you well know
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  • From ANON - Heather on December 06, 2006
    Ok you want a review how is this one .. I stayed up all night after you gave me the link to find that the stories are unfinished.. * Pouts* I want more or .. or ... yeah just guess what the or is . You get better and better hun and that is honesty from one writer to another. Give me more dear.....
    H

    ps...we will rp more later sweets
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  • From Jan on December 02, 2006
    I said it once I'll say it a million times, love it. I had lost this story for a little bit, but I have found it and really don't plan to lose it again. I am so glad that James finally got that sticky collar off. Please update soon ^__^
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  • From ANON - purrfus on December 01, 2006
    ch 1 th 10: Creative creature with nice explanations of powers, history, and attributes. Relationships between SS/LM/JP are intriguing.

    Several chapters are choppy and there are some grammar issues. There are very few references to time which makes the story harder to follow. The attitudes etc between LM and Voldy & JP and Voldy are inconsistant. James maybe explained because of changing plans and cat type nature, but no rationale is provided for LM / Voldy. The chapters are short and could use some additional detail including timeline information to smooth the flow. With some of the scenes there is really no way to know if they are 10 minutes, a day, or 3 days apart.

    I get the impression that this is very clear in your mind, you just need to work a little harder at making in clear to the readers.

    I will be watching for more.

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  • From ANON - anon on December 01, 2006
    I really enjoy this series and am glad to see an update! :)
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  • From mistresskagome1 on November 04, 2006
    sad so many hits an no reviews. i like it. its an interestig plot to the harry poter series and i like it. its fun having so manythings that can be done with a story that only revolves around certain charactors. it leaves so much open for the fans to wirte. HEHEHE> i love it when big name authors leave so much open for interpretation. and taht would be a good reason for the malfys to indeed hate the potters now then wouldn't it be? i love your writing, you really are a great author. keep up the good work. yay.. lol okay later.
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