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Reviews for Blood, Love and Betrayal

By : gryffindorblood85

From becka8199 on January 03, 2010
I enjoyed it! Good job. Hermione have a quartet of children was a shock, and then twins! Wow. I like that you made Hermione and Harry twins. You always sit with Blaise or Theo. Nice Job! :)
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From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 24, 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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From ANON - angel on December 24, 2006
that was a great endding i love it and i cant wait intill your next story .. in till then later for now and have a merry x-mas.... later for now

angel
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From ANON - lisa on December 11, 2006
Awwww that was sooo beautiful!!!! Loved it. Soo cute to. and yay more lemons . Good chappie. please update again soon.
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From ANON - Heather on December 11, 2006
Okay, normally I don't comment on stories unless I know the author. But this time I couldn't help myself. I like the whole idea for this story, I think you did a good job on the plot. It was a bit confusing sometimes though. Just a few things you might want to fix: you keep changing the children's ages. First they were 3 months, then 1 month then four months all on the *same* page! Then when Draco and Hermione got married they were again 4 months. That's hella confusing. You keep re-spelling the kids names throughout the later chapters. And also....you switched Hermione's middle name twice.

I don't want you to think I didn't like it, but it could be better if you were a bit more consistant in the facts you've thought up. It confuses the reader and sort of makes them not want to continue on.
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From ANON - angel on December 10, 2006
aww that was great i lvoe it .. and is funny what the litlle ones did .. please please update soon i would love to read more later for now

angel
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From ANON - allieq on December 10, 2006
Please update
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From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2006
Great fic!
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From ANON - angel on December 10, 2006
wow that was great i love it .. and in glad harry found some new ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please udpate soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From ANON - lisa on December 10, 2006
awww the babies are getting so big!!!! sos sweet. and finally they a re graduated. and wow Poor Harry but at least he has someone new and so does Ginny. and I cant wait to see the wedding and see what they all will be doing, if they a re successful in a trade or their own lil business or teaching and such. With four babies life should be quite interesting for Hermione and Draco lol thank god they have people who can babysit or they may never have sex again lol. well goodluck rl does get crazy. looking forward to another chappie. Please update soon.
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From ANON - Anon on November 24, 2006
Aww a very sweet fic. :) I really enjoyed it.
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From ANON - lisa on November 24, 2006
Yay an update. and it was sooo nice and wonderful. Good chappie. More. please update soon.
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From ANON - angel on November 23, 2006
wow that was great i love it .. im glad draco's mom will part os the babies lives to .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ...later for now

angel
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From ANON - angel on November 09, 2006
man that was great i love it .. and how the boys acted when she show them the babies.. wow ..please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
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From ANON - lisa on November 05, 2006
Wow that was awesome. Hermione sure shocked Harry and Draco. I cannot wait to see what happens now.and I am quite sad Severus died. He's a fave of mine. ohh well. Please update soon.
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