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Reviews for On the Wings of Change

By : Dreamwind
  • From ANON - lunamoonangel on August 15, 2006
    great story pairing should be either 3,5,6 or 7 not bothered which just like those ones
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on August 13, 2006
    5, 6, or 7 is my choice. :D

    I like it so far, but the story seems segmented like we are missing things.

    It doesn't exactly have a smooth flow, it seems to jump from area to area, with no smooth transition.

    Keep up the good work, coolsa.
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  • From ANON - david on August 13, 2006
    HARRY SEVERUS CHARLIE!

    great, some parts confusing but great.
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  • From ANON - Mark on August 13, 2006
    charlie/sev/harry

    i really love it but there are some parts where harry met kerr that really confused me...what did she say to him that somehow had him knowing she was a girl, that her name was....w/e and that she wasn't a threat. you really need to get into more detail.
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  • From ANON - Lucy on August 13, 2006
    sev/har/char

    so kewl!!!
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  • From ANON - Sarah on August 13, 2006
    HARRY SEV CHARLIE!!! GREAT STORY!!!
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  • From ANON - Brandy on August 13, 2006
    I really think it should be h/s/c as charlie is an expert on dragons which means he won't be too freaked out on someone of the behaviors Harry is sure to have now and severus with them as he's a very intelligent, capable person who will keep Harry grounded with his presence. Harry should of course be the sub of the three, because he's so cute when he is. lol Unless you don't want to do it that way......

    ITS REALLY GREAT!!! lol
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  • From ANON - Annie on August 13, 2006
    HARRY/SEV/CHARLIE!!!!!!! Please lol....anyways its a really good story, I'm just sorry I i didn't find it when it first came out, been having in'net problems, lol. I really like it but I'm really confused on some parts, which you'll probably explain later so i'm not going to waste your time asking about, unless it doesn't get cleared up at which point i'll be forced to ask. LoL :-)

    I hope your muse(s) is/are good to you.
    Happy Writtings.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 12, 2006
    harry x severus x draco
    harry x severus x draco
    harry x severus x draco
    harry x severus x draco
    harry x severus x draco
    harry x severus x draco
    harry x severus x draco
    harry x severus x draco
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  • From ANON - Miz Valeer on August 12, 2006
    ahhhhhh!! Number five!...number five...orrrr 7...hm..FIVE! :D *dances*
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  • From ANON - Fallen on August 11, 2006
    Great story I think Harry x Charlie because ya know charlie's a dragon tamer and I don't
    mind if Severus is added or draco
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  • From ANON - varjo on August 11, 2006
    Deffinitely Harry - Severus - Draco!! It's a good story, but you need a little more details. Right now the story's like a longish summary. More describing the surroundings, the people and how they feel. Oh, and you should decide whos point of view the story is being told from. Almost nothing is more annoying than a story where the pov keeps changing without warning. Keep writing, it's a good idea for a story, Harry-dragon...!
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  • From ANON - death906 on August 11, 2006
    Harry and Charlei please! I think wiht Harry being a dragon and Charlies dragon abilities, they'd make a great pairing!
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  • From ANON - nanashi on August 11, 2006
    Harry x Charlie please!?!
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  • From ANON - Beth on August 10, 2006
    I would really like to see harry/severus/charlie
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