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Reviews for A New Hope

By : Brittin
  • From ridert on February 19, 2007
    verry interesting and the Idea of Snape as a caring father is sweet hope to see more soon
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  • From MrGalion on February 19, 2007
    Hey That Wasn't Such A Long Wait *Note the Sarcastic Voice*
    Well Great to Have you update Again.
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  • From leeannpitbull on February 19, 2007
    Great chapter. I was sooooo incredibly happy that you updated. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - LMStruchen on October 13, 2006
    take you time can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Akinaria on September 15, 2006
    Your chapters are really very short but I am enjoying this and would like to see more. In the interests of helping other writers to improve, I would suggest that the area you need to concentrate on is emotions. You need to create a clear idea in your mind of how characters feel and react in situations (and alone) and practice weaving their emotions into the byplay of the plot. For example; how would someone react to being forcibly kissed shortly after being raped? Then, how would your version of Harry react specifically. Then you need to weave those emotions into the speach and action. If you don't like how you need the characters to behave then you need to take a look at the plot; if you don't want it to be angsty then it is best to leave out the rape, beating would be enough to run away anyway etc. I hope that helps. smiles, Akinaria x
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on September 06, 2006
    Um...either Draco, or Damien. It could also be Severus, wanting to talk. Oh well, I'll find out on the next update:)
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  • From ANON - angel on September 04, 2006
    that was great .. i love it .. and was it draco who came in ...i hope mione is there for him .. and ron will i say dich him he .... please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - toads on September 02, 2006
    can't wait till the next chapter :) not to rush you or anything but can it be soon lol :)
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  • From ANON - l'etje on September 01, 2006
    this was very very goo keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - LMStruchen on August 23, 2006
    This is a great story. Take your time with the updates. I know how starting classes can be.
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  • From ANON - ! on August 18, 2006
    WOW! This turned out better then I expected what with a new autor for the story!! TWO OF MY FAVORITE PAIRINGS!!! HELLZ YA!!!
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  • From ANON - angel on August 17, 2006
    wow sirius is damien's father wow .... please please please updat soon iwould lvoe to read what will happen next .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Gabby Kathleen on August 17, 2006
    Wow that was a unexpected turn of events. I never thought that Sirius would be the father. You kept the supense going. I cant wait until Draco and Harry tell everyon ethat they are together. I am hoping that the baby is Draco's. I think Draco would be a great father. So is Harry going to start consaidering Damien family and also Severus? Update soon I cant wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Trequela Davis on August 16, 2006
    You have got to finish this story because it was getting to the go part i mean i really
    wanted know just who the other parnet of Damien, so please finish this story.

    Sign, QueenTre
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  • From ANON - angel on August 14, 2006
    wow .. i hope the baby is draco's.. and did sev know about harry and draco.. please please please update soon i would love to read more........... later for now

    angel
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