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Reviews for Lendoren

By : septentrion
  • From ANON - firewall on December 31, 2006
    It was good to see Erwin maintain his snarky self even when home with the Lendoren and it was amusing to see that they were exasperated with him as well. The unicorns were interesting and I laughed when Erwin made reference to the others peeping at them. Thank you for another wonderful installment of this story. Hapy New Year to you and your intrepid team of translators.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2006
    I realize this isn't your story, but only a translation that you're doing ... but as of the 28th chapter, I've had enough. I kept thinking this story would develop into something and it keeps going farther and farther away from "Harry Potter" and into something that sounds like a fantasy crossover. This is where I get off the ride!
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  • From ANON - johanna on December 26, 2006
    i just wanted to tell you that you're doing a wonderful job. i just started reading this today and couldn't stop until i finished every chapter you've put up so far. i appreciate all your hard work and look forward to the next translated chapter.


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  • From ANON - firewall on December 25, 2006
    I must admit I was surprised to find a new chapter today because I thought you'd be too busy to be able to take the time to post one. I'm glad that you did however because it was one that explained some of the background of the Lendoren that we hadn't really experienced. I found it interesting when I read that Harry was Voldemort's equal magically. I imagine if the Lendoren help him focus his magic, he will gain the confidence that he is capable of defeating him.

    I hope that you are able to take time to enjoy the holidays and I'm looking forward to your next posting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2006
    Wow. Very very good. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Mayken on December 25, 2006
    Hi,
    Just finished reading the story up to the most resent chapter posted and I find this story very interesting, and the fact that it's been translated from another language fascinating.
    The plot is wonderful and the work by the Translators is worthy of applause, but I find one thing bothers me with each and every chapter.
    The Grammatical errors and the very blatant spelling mistakes are very off putting and I find it harder to concentrate on what is going on in each chapter.
    I wonder do you have someone re-read over each translated chapter before posting.
    If not I would suggest you do as it would make things a lot less painful for the readers.

    I think it
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  • From ANON - Citten on December 25, 2006
    thanks for the post. that was very inlighting and well be usfull in some way and now i hope that no one guesses it and speaks it aloud or we may all be in big trouble. again happy hoildays!
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  • From ANON - Citten on December 25, 2006
    that is just too bad that she didnot describe it better but thats okay i will just have to us my imagionation to the best of my ability and that is okay too. thank you-for everything hope that your hoildays are merry and bright and that you are surrounded by family and love. :)
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 18, 2006
    How interesting that it took Hermione becoming angry before she was able to link with Erwin and use his power as well. She continues to struggle with her Lendoren powers, doesn't she? At the same time, he is much more patient with her here and this may make it easier for her to explore her powers.

    You did a wonderful job translating this chapter as usual; however, I found the flow of your English much smoother this time around. Really well done! My Sundays wouldn't be the same if I didn't have a chapter to read although this week, I had to wait until Monday before I could review. Thank you again for sharing this story with us.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2006
    Looking forward to another chapter. This is really interesting :)
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 17, 2006
    Good chappie. The silvery Circle sounds sooo beautiful. and am glad to see Hermione and Severus practicing. Wonder how Ron, Harry and Ginny are doing? I bet they are just completely gobsmacked. Am glad Severus will get his reward. woot woot. Cant wait for more. More more more. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Citten on December 12, 2006
    yaeh another chapter! one question: i am some what confused about how hermione look now that lendoren is starting to show, could you please describe it better in more detail?
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 10, 2006
    This was a very good transitional chapter. It gave us snippets of information of what will come and whet our interest in the coming chapter. Once again, you have done a wonderful job of translating the original work. Thank you for all the hours you and your team put into this.
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 10, 2006
    Cool Hermio0ne's changing, coming tinto her own. Lol bet she can knock the socks off Malfoy now!!! Lol. Poor Severus/ Erwin He just cant win lol. Love it though. He's due a good dose in being humble. And I think he deserves a special reward for being good during breakfast. Cant wait to find out more about the commun ity and the explanations and I cant wait to see their training. more more more please. Please update soon again. Indeed you're getting better and better. Goodluck a nd Keep up the goodwork.
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 03, 2006
    Now that was a good use for the timeturner!!! Nothing like a hot, steamy shower to heat things up! Nicely done. I'm looking forward to them going to the community. It will be interesting to see how Hermione's friends deal with the Lendoren. Thanks for sharing this chapter and I'm looking forward to next week's.
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