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Reviews for Lendoren

By : septentrion
  • From ANON - lisa on December 03, 2006
    Yay an update and some lemony goodness. Severus is such amorous being too bad we cant take him home.lol Keep up the good work. You're doing better and better. There may be mistakes, no one is perfect. And never should be. Prefectionism can really suck at times lol. Goodluck as always. Loved it.
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  • From ANON - Bella Snape on December 03, 2006
    This was hot! I liked it. It seems Snape is finally putting his foot down. At last!
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  • From ANON - Morticia Heartless on December 02, 2006
    Your translation to English is okay, but grammar is being ignored for speed. You also need to remember that part of your readership are sight impaired and need to increase the size of the print without having to use the bar at the bottom of the screem to move the page. This is because along with the sight impairment, tracking with the eyes can also be a problem. Please remember to transfer to html format not one of the others so the print well adjust to the screen.

    As to the story, I feel that it is based in French Legend which I am unfamilier. I like the story and the characters. But I would like to know more about which legends it is based upon.
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  • From ANON - Toranoko on November 28, 2006
    This story is wonderful! I don't know french so i'm VERY greatful for your translations! Please keep me updated on Updates my schedual keeps me from checking back regularly so I would love to have some kind of notice! Anyways concidering this isn't your original story i'm just going to say wonderful translations!

    Lisa
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  • From ANON - skye on November 26, 2006
    oh wow..amazingly this keeps getting better with every new chapter...loved the few questions Snape asked of the boys about the map....lol....
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 26, 2006
    Ch 23 - Poor Severus. I can sympathize with his battle between doing his love and his duty. It is also good that the two can empathize with the other's feelings. They are still walking a fine line as they get to know each other better.

    Thank you for the time and energy you and your team put into the story's translation. I look forward to the weekends when I'll have a new chapter to read.
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  • From ANON - lisa on November 26, 2006
    Lol that was funny. They do love to argue it seems. cant wait for more. and lol i really like the story so i can wait for the lemons. the rather heated arguments are quite entertaining. So more more more please. Please update soon.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on November 26, 2006
    OOH Good. I like that Harry, Ron and Ginny know exactly what is going on and likewise with Snape.

    Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 26, 2006
    they are just so intersting to listen to and watch when they are arguing-severus and hermione. (did you just notice that i stated that as if i have just watched it on a movie or film? boy thats sad.) thanks for the update and i hope life is treating you well. until next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Citten on November 21, 2006
    don't worry, i really did not mean you to go back but just to let you know. thank you! besides all it does it makes me slow down beside the stories to good to not just egnore it ;) i am really looking forward to what else happened to that conversion or right after it (he he.. he must have been really mad.)
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  • From ANON - sheedy on November 19, 2006
    Great update!
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  • From ANON - LVanna on November 19, 2006
    Firstly, I love this story and have been following it since Chapter 1. There is one sentence though that caused me to step back and say WTF to myself.

    Harry and Ron now knew that Hermione and their Potions Professor had consumed their relationship.

    I think the word you were looking for is consummated

    I can imagine how hard it must be to translate a story like this, or any story for that matter. Thanks for all the hard work you put into this!


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  • From ANON - lisa on November 19, 2006
    Ohh dear Hermione's finally told the boys. They are not going to take it well. and Lol Severus and Hermione verbally arguing while she's telling the boys is so funny. Just hilarius. I cant wait I thinkj i smell more lemons. well hopeful really. Please update again soon. Love it as always. you are awesome to be translating and bringing it to those of us who dont know a lick of french. goodluck still.
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  • From ANON - firewall on November 19, 2006
    Ch 22 - I'm glad that she is finally telling her friends about her relationship with Erwin and she was wise to realize he wouldn't be able to stay away. It will be interesting to see how he handles her reaction to his sneaking into her bedroom to eavesdrop.

    Thanks once again for the sharing of this wonderful story.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on November 19, 2006
    I love it when Sev and Hermione are arguing and not lovey dovey with each other. It seems to be more with their characters, and I am glad that my words mean something to you!

    This is still good... Ron thinks he's a better lover???? Idiot!!!!
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