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Reviews for Guilt By Association

By : KamirineGoddess
  • From tanyaflorio on March 27, 2010
    PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STOORY PLEASE!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - CC on September 02, 2006
    I am enjoying your story and looking forward to whatever comes next, even if it is a bit melodramatic. After reading your other reviews, I see that you have had grammatical and spelling issues in the past. Apparently, you have fixed most of them. However, there are still a few: in the first chapter there are a few extraneous 'I's in various sentences, you are missing some commas and periods, you wrote 'except' when you meant 'expect', and most distressing for taking me straight out of the story - a fowl is poultry, you meant 'foul'. You made this latter error twice in the same serious speech. Spellcheck and Grammatik are not going to tell you if you have the wrong word if it is spelled right and the same part of speech as the word you intend to use. This can only be found in a rigorous editing process. Good luck though, I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - kolgrim on September 01, 2006
    I'm so loving this!!! Please you must update soon, plese... I Must know what happens next! I love the way you've made them =)
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  • From ANON - Draconis on August 31, 2006
    I love Pansy! And Ron rocked! Update please!
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  • From ANON - OzGirl on August 31, 2006
    this is an amazing story.
    please update soon, and when you do, will it be possible for you to email me with the next chapter(s)?
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on August 31, 2006
    Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou. I read it all again and it was so much better now that everything is fixed. I'm sorry for blaming you for something your spellchecker did as well as a site malfunction so I'm reviewing to say that this fic is just as wonderful as I'd orginally thought it was. So keep up the great work and update soon cause now I can't wait for the next chapter.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From ANON - jojo on August 30, 2006
    hey, I think you're story is pretty good. I've noticed a few mistakes in it, however. First, you skip a lot of ... and ,,, second, you write Draco's last name as Malloy, while it's MalFoy. Just thought I'd point it out...
    But please continue, I like it!
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on August 30, 2006
    Um what the hell? Why are you spelling 'Malfoy' 'Malloy. It's really annoying and quite a turn off to an otherwise wonderful story. And is it just me or was this entire thing done in a rush. From what i read you haven't read this over at all before posting it. There are words missing and sentences without periods and some little bits that don't make sense and are therefore quite a distracttion from the story.

    Um unless you can stop from calling him 'Malloy' and maybe just read it over once before posting it so that you catch some of the little things I think I'm going to find it quite hard to continue reading this fic.

    But I'll leave you on a good note. Which is that the story is definitely intriguing and plot wise you did a wonderful job with this chapter. Keep it up and update soon.

    PS. sorry if that was kinda flamey, it wasn't meant to be.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From ANON - Echo on August 23, 2006
    Interesting fic. So it was all a bet for Draco at the beginning but he fell for Harry along the way. Blaise, is a slythern indeed, stealing Harry right out from under Draco's nose. I suppose Draco doesn't deserve Harry but does Blaise? Is he really in love with Harry or just in lust? Poor Harry should stay far FAR away from slytherins, all size and shape. Please update soon.
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  • From Kiira on August 21, 2006
    This is very good! I must read more =)
    Plese update as soon as you can, okay?
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on August 21, 2006
    I absolutely adore this fic. At first I was like this isn't going to brilliant or anything cause the summary was weird for me but then I read it anyways and boy am I glad. It was pure gold in my opinion, mainly cause things are going I hoped most fics would [with the exception of Draco being on top but I can see how that would work better for this fic]. Anyways You've definitely got talent and I so I encourage you to update as soon as humanly possible and you will have a very happy reviewer on your hands. [PS. usually i offer up a morsel of critisim just to be level and all but this fic was too good for me to try]. I especailly liked how you pulled off Ron's point of view without it being weird and then switched so seamlessly to Draco's. I can't wait for the next chapter.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From ANON - Draconis on August 21, 2006
    Oh the drama! Draco may not hate Harry as much as he thinks he does, Hermione's got a mean right hook. Ron's still being selfish, Harry's moving on with Blaise, Dumbledore manipulating people even though they don't know it because he has Yedi Mind Tricks! OMG, this story rocks so hard!!!
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  • From ANON - Shinigami24 on August 20, 2006
    *shakes head* Ron! YOU BAKA! You had NO right to keep the truth from Harry! I thought you're supposed to be his best friend! Seamus- I STRONGLY suggest you and Neville 'fess up to your signifcant others! Since I strongly doubt Blaise will stop blackmailing you! Blackmailers NEVER stop until they're dead! *whistles* Hermione- I STRONGLY suggest you and Draco, plus pansy GET together to compare notes! Plus someone SHOULD ask Snape for some truth potion and use it on Ron! It's the ONLY way he'll tell the truth! That or bring Molly in for one thing...As I said before a relationship based on lies IS DOOMED to fail!
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  • From ANON - Eddie on August 20, 2006
    This story is amazing! I Hope you update again soon! I'm seriously on the edge of my seat, it's so angsty!! Awesome!!
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  • From ANON - MaddiChan on August 20, 2006
    LMAO! This was so great though I love that Draco already knows something's up! I just know he still loves Harry but now I'm interested in finding out how Draco will get Harry back.
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