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Reviews for Total Eclipse

By : Given2Fly
  • From ANON - Annie on November 21, 2006
    oh i like this, more more!
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  • From ANON - mack on November 15, 2006
    wow....I'm pretty sure I left a review on here saying something to that degree, but I hadn't intended it to be rude, and I'm sorry if you took it that way. There's nothing wrong with a little constructive criticism, and you should be glad that people care enough to review with there concerns. As you can see, regardless of my apprehension in regards to your plot choices, I came back to check for a new chapter, because this is an interesting story and I've enjoyed reading it so far. I will continue to do so, though I think your reaction to any negative reviews you've received are a little immature. I'm sorry if my opinion offends you, but that's the way it is. I hope you continue with this story, because you seem to have accumulated a number of rather devoted readers who would be disappointed if you don't carry on with this plot. I don't want to sound like I'm dictating or lecturing you, but you can't let a negative review upset you so much - they happen, and will always happen, no matter how good or bad a story is. You can't please everyone.
    As for the lack of e-mail address, I apologize for not leaving it, but I'm not at all comfortable making that information public to whoever happens across your story - I get enough spam as it is.
    Anyway, I hope you'll take my words to heart
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  • From ANON - ocard on October 19, 2006
    now, i may not be a very good writer (hence why i will never ever actually post my stories on AFF, or anywhere for that matter), but i can tell when a story is worth reading, and when it's a piece of shit. your story, my dear, is the best one i've read in a long time. whoever the son of bitch was that told you how to write your story is on crack. i personally hope that this story will never finish because i love it so much, and i have no doubt that your exemplimary (yeah, i probably spelled that wrong) writing will lead to an excellent fanfic. YOU ARE SOOOO GOOD!!!!! SCREW THE HEATHENS THAT TELL YOU OTHERWISE!!!!!!!!!!! i will eagerly be waiting for your next update. i have this story saved under my favorites =)
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  • From ANON - Joanna on October 16, 2006
    Hello! I have been following this story on Coloured Grey website and just want to let you know that I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. I like the fact that the story is fresh (no one has thought of this concept before). I think by explaining things later as the story progresses captivates the readers. I know cuz I'm hooked!
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  • From ANON - me on October 16, 2006
    i like this story, so i'm glad that you will be continuing
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  • From ANON - Rebecca on October 16, 2006
    More, more, more!!

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  • From ANON - Lisa on October 16, 2006
    Great work!! really great plot and amazing implications. Congratulations!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 14, 2006
    Awesome! Can't wait to see what happens, thanks so much for the update, and hope we get some action and tension soon!
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  • From ANON - ocard on October 13, 2006
    that was excellect!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! MORE MORE MORE!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 12, 2006
    I'm confused :( I just read through some of your previous reviews, and someone said "I can't wait til he finds out she's pregnant." .....is she pregnant, or does she just work in a feild that develops new types of potions? That's how I initially took it anyways....
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  • From ANON - Maria on October 09, 2006
    I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter =D
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  • From ANON - stacy sanchez on October 07, 2006
    hey this is a great story please update soon!
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  • From ANON - pumkin on October 07, 2006
    i like it. update soon please. it's going to get realy interesting. i can't wait.
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  • From ANON - mitz on October 06, 2006
    ooh cant wait until he finds out she's pregnant
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  • From ANON - Lillian on October 05, 2006
    LOVE IT! LOVE IT !!! WRITE MORE!
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